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Old 12-12-04, 10:51 AM   #1
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Rap a few silly clues ill like utility crew work around the clock

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Rap a few silly clues ill like utility crew work around the clock
Hot like a construction worker, corruption alerter on the block
“Hey dawg your foundation in falling the town organization is calling
For renovation you need some sick bricks and cement before installing
House goods also a mouse could be present get ready for extermination
When I approach saw roach smash with shoe they’ll smash you elevation
Must be made the deal was fake by real estate on the contract devastation
On property value”, “MADD the house laid untouched think I paid too much?”
“Yeah dawg in this economy gospel the phony is possible so do a true search
Got retard stats but wear hard hats in the backyard sat under trees
Fleas leaps when they sees meat, just blood suckers with blunder decrees
Ouch! One bit me
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Old 12-12-04, 11:01 AM   #2
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dope vocab...your lines are a little bit too long but other wise this is cool man...
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Old 12-12-04, 11:02 AM   #3
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Wtf Was This Bout', Weird Topic But Eh', 6/10.
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Old 12-12-04, 12:10 PM   #4
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hey thanks for th eprops and critique for real yall
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Old 12-12-04, 12:43 PM   #5
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sup man you think you can give me feedback too?...my text is in the open mic..the name is Father Please...

Thanks
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Old 12-12-04, 01:44 PM   #6
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X-Spitty should've gotten real feedback you just sound self centered right here dawg
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