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Old 12-12-04, 02:06 PM   #1
Houdini
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From: I'll stay swinging until I die, cuz Nigga's said I'll die by Hanging- Wreckage
Dear Grandpa,

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Dear Papa,

Day's Have gone, You are too
My life is wrecked', Cuz Im missin'you
Grandpa...I wish you home...
Nomore talk's on the phone...
A place where you belong...
A place where heaven' Hold's you strong
My grandpa..

An angel Sent to guide us, Through the fire and Open light
A man who dared to die for us, walking side by side
Christmas, isnt christmas, And no it isnt santa
Lord,Take good care of my friend, My angel.....My grandpa...

I told him bye, I watched him cry
I hit the stair's right when he died
I swear I seen tear's from a mouse
Silence rang all through the house

Holidays arent the same, I do not know how to mend...
My heart is on empty, Lord give me a message and then....
I will love like a mountain...Shedding tears like this fountain I am....
Give me the rarest look, One that he will know me there
One that my life will see......Ohhh....My grandpa...

Im missing you..

Love always'

Your grandson...
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Old 12-12-04, 09:34 PM   #2
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From: ex ATL native. i live near asheville NC
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man, that hit its right at home. i couldnt give anything less then a 10 on something so much to the heart. sorry about the pop. i be feelin that too. take it easy man
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Old 12-13-04, 11:16 AM   #3
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yeah good piece.. some of the stuff was elementary.. but this was pretty heartfelt..
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Old 12-13-04, 02:10 PM   #4
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meh....aight.......7/10
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Old 12-15-04, 09:37 PM   #5
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tight shit man...hit me in the heart...8/10
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