Yeah, here's another track........

Title : Da Grim Reaper


Its short cause the person that supplied the beat made it like that, I might finish it in the future, but I still like it......


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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/gdeucemusic.htm

Oh, and dont forget to nodd ya head, you feel me............

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Grim

shit was Fire please bellee dat. you know i got this track on repeat for a while. shit was straight fire. No doubt. keep it up fam lay. Good beat. tell dude to increase the amp and base on final copy. it wil have peeps head banging like BOOM BOOM BOOM. like that knuck if you buck shit. ever had the bass up on that? DOPENess..

overall 7.9/10

nice shit

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Thanks man, I will send word to JP............................

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Grim

fa sho, uppin dis..................................

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Grim

i liked the lyrics and shit, beat was good, but wasnt as good as i thought. but i still felt this.
8/10 fo sho

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

ah'ight playa....this track was ah'ight....one thing dats real noticeable is the beat is louder than the vocals...I think ya vocals is at a good vol an beat is a tad loud...ya flow was on point, an lyrics were cool....but u got da same problem as every rapper wit some gravel in his vocal cords got.....kinda of a monotone delivery....it lacked energy to me...its a laidback beat but u was too laidback on it, u need to have some influentions in ya verse an change ya rhyme scheme up more...it'll really bring u out...cuz it was a good track but jus okay to me....something I'd give for respect too, but wouldn't even remember a week later...jus livin up a lil on da track on u got ya game wrapped son...stay up...............1

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an overall nice track but vocalz a bit to low keep at it shits tyte

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yea i agree wit trip[le on thisone.. i also heard the flow was real mechanic..wasent as smooth as a flow normally is..but it was decent.. just keep droppin ya know ? word.. stay up -1

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ight coo, uppin..........................................

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Grim

This was dope G Deuce, glad to see you keep droppin tracks man..like the beat a lot, and the change ups,like youre lyrics as well..theres really nothing wrong with this track except the vocals are low, but everything else is str8 man...tight track..1

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thanks triple and fluid............................uppin for feedback..................

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Grim

o shit man this was hot.....ya i agree with everyone else up your vocals a bit...but shit the lryics were tight....o and also G i heard your verse to bitches want riches hmm i think your better sticking to the way you roll now like how you did this audio..