this week topic is .... "The perfect day to you" Explain what the perfect day would be to you

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I just keyed this in...here goes...

It was last Wednesday, and I knew it when I awoke
The day was gonna be great, I won't even try to joke
First off was an occurence any man might adore
My penis was twice the size it was the night before
Reading the newspaper usually gets me cranky
But the Red Sox had won a series against the Yankees
Cash Money Records was crushed to one flattened piece
All that was left in the rubble were twelve platinum teeth
Then the doorbell rang, it was quite a mystery
A delivery of some new promotional discs for free
There must have been twenty CD's there I think
And the delivery girl? So fine I didn't dare to blink
I told her "I've got a package here you might try on for size...
Because the price of stamps isn't all that's on the rise"
We went inside to negotiate this special delivery
And to make sure it got sticky, she licked every bit of me
I thought to myself, "I'm getting laid then I'm gonna...
Go outside" What did I see, but a parade in my honor?
It was excellent, my brain started bubbling, fizzing
There were floats, marching bands, and juggling midgets
Just when I thought that it was the best in full...
I saw a float with giant paper mache spectacles
Then I met this other kid, who thought his day is cooler...
So I smacked him in the face and said "Fuck you Ferris Bueller!"

here's mine kinda rushed

Wake up to clear skies in all directions/
You know it’s fun in the sun with no interruptions/
On my way to work I run into my boss/
Tell him I won’t be in he doesn’t care shaking his head yes with a toss/
He asks what I’m doing on a day so beautiful/
I say “well if I had funds” he cuts me off giving me money by the fist full/

Now I’ve got dough the day off to go all I need is a hoe/
Hit up the mall scopin for some pigeons that are good to go/
Rent a rag top and pick up my boys at the bus stop/
Four hoes , four guys headed for the beach staring under this girl’s belly top/
This girl’s got it going on rubbing my leg I know she wants to get it on/
Hope the beach ain’t crowded and with my luck everyone’s gone/

Drop the other’s off me and the belly top girl head for the liquor store/
Pull in behind and start fucking this bitch but I’m wanting more/
End it with a blow job “what you want me to do with it”/
I say like N.W.A “don’t matter baby just don’t bite it”/
Now in the store pick up a forty of whiskey, one of vodka and oh don’t forget the bracardi/
Threw in a few ol English bottles now we’re ready to have a party/

Finish up the party fuck a couple of more times take every one home/
Drunk as fuck no po po and nothing in the way to dint the chrome/
Wake up the next day not not even a little hangover/
Looking back at the fun wishing I could do it over/

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Nurse: We’re loosing him! Doctor, we need to start operating, now!

Huh… where am I, everything… bright…

God: Welcome my son, your in a place where reality is but my illusion, where I create clarity, and I control confusion, dilutions, and my word is but my will, by the force of my constitution./
OnSlaught: Why have I been brought here, were those shots my final sights? Is that the meaning of this visit, is this the meaning of those lights, is that why your presence shimmers and glows so bright, I’m sorry that I failed you, I had no strength left to fight./
G: True I have but called you, but not for long, there are questions in your mind, and I am never wrong, If you believe in me, your memories be strong, but if you loose your faith then your memories will be gone./
O: I have so many questions, do aliens Exist?/
G: Everything exists within the power of my midst/
O: And are there such things as Miracles, that happen just because they do?/
G: You were shot 5 times, and you will not die, shouldn’t I ask that of you?/
O: Will you forgive me for my sins? I have sinned against all those below and above./
G: I have already forgiven you, for this and this alone is God’s Love./
O: Will the world ever end, just be destroyed within my lifetimes range/
G: It all depends… on whether or not the world can ever change./
O: Does that mean that one day there might be peace?/
G: Perhaps, but only if the hatred of humans will ever cease./
O: I only hope my children will see that day./
G: And so they will, but only if you teach them in my ways./
G: And only if you spread my words, for my words are the key to salvation./
G: And one of my single words alone, can destroy all and every temptation./
G: But none of this will be true if you continue with your retaliation/
O: You knew? That I would go back and strike him with my wrath?/
G: I know everything, and that is the wrong path/
G: You can choose now to make something of your Life/
G: But you have to choose now, either the light or the knife/
G: And if you choose the Knife, expect a life of Strife, and never meeting you children or your wife/
O: I understand, I believe that there is nothing else I need
G: Oh by the way… there’s nothing wrong with a little weed.

Nurse: Doctor, we’ve revived him!

5 minute Keystyle

tight flow madd metphores and ya rhyme scheme is banging much luv.

perfectz day to me............been a while since ive raped hol up


perfect day starts with a "knock" to the door.....

"key-style"
hello who is it~it was this fine ass chick who had to pay a visit~i sit and sit thinkin when im a gonna hit it~when suddently shes bent over lookin like half hunch back half migit~
after the masacre cum hit her face, i left my place and headed to my boyz house~right then..he handed me a blunt
and some hen and we headed to the car to smoke out~got out blitzed~couldnt see shit, tryed to go left but missed a step and triped~lyin on the ground i passed out, then woke up to suprise, to a "dick suckin marathon" with his girl and his momz,( damn me thinkin "how high" was i )
after i "satisfied" them i was off to the studio to lay down some tracks~to proove myself as an artist and get some feed back, maybe sign a contract~ when this "guilty conscious" told me i was obnoxius and to "knock myself out"~then me like, "jada" you so weak jay-z could shut your mouth~after interuptions i focused and came up with 16 beats, with 16 chorus's, each holdin three verses a piece~
some love type, battle type, and some showin love to the deceased~ like my niece, pac and b.i.g~then i woke up, lyin to my girl and a c.d`~ entiled "blais-Who the fuck did you think, a calloration with N-SYNC'S JUSTIN TIMBERflake, before that i'd jump into a pissed filled LAKE~the best day wasnt over juzt then i got sober,signed a deal with "MURDER" inc and same day was in ya posters~ put "ill" inside dem BLOODS,and kicked "JA RULE" out and his RICHARD PRYER HAVIN HAIRCUT ASS head~ cause I CRY, WHEN YOU CRY, BUT "WHO'D CRY IF THAT FAG WAS DEAD~

perfect day ---fucked hot bitch, got head from a milf, finally put together a cd, and killed ja rules's wack career

My perfect day consists of waken up next to beautiful girls//
dressed in goochi silk langerie and there usual pearls//
breakfast made..bacon n eggs..served on a Golden Plate//
as I count last nights earnings from all da Stolen Frieight//
dressed to the nines, geard up wit all da newest kinds//
see what crews is doin crimes..see who got caught and is doin time//
cause I dont lift a finger..sweat a drop..open an eye//
why would I, when I got these brave troops hopin ta die//
strokin each side of ma crisp dollas on ma face//
go to the bottom floor and put da dollas in da safe//
now its gettin late, gotta decide the days plannin//
spend da day gamblin or sittin on da beach tannin//
not to energetic da evenin promises to excite//
partyin all night wit da mintest girls, that are better than alright//
do what i do wit da afternoon, blast da tunes and pass da shrooms//
smoke da weed eat some chips, get a bitch to get on her knees//
read her lips let her see ya dick..tell her she needs the shit then feed her it//
then send her wit some cash to get somethin to dress her ass//
head for da shower fast the jams r startin in less then half//
hop in da limo head to tha partys address//
wit da girls dressed on ya shoulders that stand to impress//
open da criss...girls hopin ta kiss..musics blarin..wit a bitch gropin ya wrist//
illest shit parties bumps all night nothin can ruin da trend//
go home wake up tomorrow and den do it again//

Yo "My Perfect Day"

A Perfect Day Would Be My Hood Wit-No-Slugs//A Mutha Fuckin Brain Wit-No-Drugs//Switch The ShootOuts To Discussions Wit No Blood...

Naa Fuck That Week Shit Here It IS...

A Perfect Day Would Be The One That I Fill Every Enemy Wit Glock-9-Bullets//i CAnt Explain The Joy I Get AS It Follow The Skin An Rips Right-Through-It//Niggas Be Found Dead All Over Queens Wit 5 To-Tha-Head//Had To Teach These Niggas For *Sleepin* On Me Left Em In They-Permanent-Bed//Leave Em Like *Pencils* Laced-Wit-Lead//A Perfect Day Would Also Involve Gettin They *Bitches* Robbin They *Riches*//An Leavin The Bodies In *Ditches* All While Keepin My Glock *Clickin*//Then I Help The Cops But Find-No-Clues//Next Thing I Know My Ass On-PrimeTime-News//Talkin Bout A Cereal Killer Removin Faggots From-The -Hood//Sayin I Hate Those Niggas So I Guess This Shit-Is-Good//Next Thing I Get Out The City To Escape-THe-Violence//Im On The Plane When A Hijacker Attempts His Hit I Left-Him-Spineless//The Plane Goes The Fuck Down An Lands In-Pittsburgh-Somewhere//I Blackout Im Dead Seein Light Like Should Me...Night Go-In-There//I Decide Its For-The-Best//I See God But In His Face I See A Sign Of His Detest//I Realize My Life Was Just-A-Quest//To Get To Heaven An A Nigga Done-Wrong//I Fall Through The Ground An Its Satan I-Land-On//I Realize What I Must Do So I Do It//I Ask Forgiveness Of The Sins That Im-Through-Wit//But God Just Shruggs An Decides A Nigga Night Is One He Can Rule Wit....

4 Mins Wit This Talk An Type Mutha Fuckas Fuck Wit That SHit...Not The Best But Shit It AInt Fuckin Bad...Peace All

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yea nice verse, but ou a couple hrs late playa