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12-19-04, 01:08 AM
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No Relation To Tina
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Like Toy Soldiers Beat....dealing With Issues Of Racism
IP:
Ok......this Is Not Finished Yet At All......i Wrote It Prolly A Few Weeks Ago And It Is Just Part Of The First Verse.....its To The Toy Soldiers Beat.....please Give Helpful Criticism......thanks
If I Ruled The World, There'd Be One Statement I'd Make It'd Be Blatant It'd State.....end Racism 'n' Hate I'd Say What I Had To Say, Next Ruler Could Take My Place You Can Take It How You May, But To Say It I Aint Ashamed If I Could Spread The Word To The Youth And They'd Actually Listen But They Dont, And Actually Thats Reality Hittin And Ive Already Had All The Visions, So The Idea Im Dishin Is Us Finishin The Martin Luther Mission 'n' <<<( And ) Its Really Not That Far Outta Reach, Lets Stretch Further If The Practiced Is The Preached, Step Forward, Lets Get Started Influence Your Kid, Say That We All Brothers Love Others Of All Races And All Colors And As The Hate Bubbles, Its Reflected Off Self Image And Understand Love Rubs Off.....just Spread It 'n' <<<(and) Just Spread Wisdom, Open Doors, Let The Youth In Love Is The Word Used In...attempts At A New Revolution.... Thats It...its A Lil Choppy In Parts.....please Leave Helpful Criticism....thanks |
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12-19-04, 06:52 PM
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IP:
uppin damnit.....helpful criticism please
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12-19-04, 06:55 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...php?t=165166--- read the rules feedback on 2 open mics and put links in thread ...
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Guess who?... ...Paramik Fuckin'...
...Owns You! ||RVS Text Champion||
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12-20-04, 02:54 AM
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IP:
oh shit my bad....i didnt even notice that....i will get to that tommorrow...i bout to hit the sack......
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12-20-04, 03:06 AM
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No Relation To Tina
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IP:
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12-20-04, 11:35 AM
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IP:
damn...nobody gonna hit this up?????????????????????
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12-20-04, 02:32 PM
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Banned: Biting
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yes yep
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ok Good topic but everyone is beating that to death. write from ya heart and let it flow forget everything you think you know about freestyling, if you write it wit feeling, you'll be felt. Holla at me and by the way keep elevating |
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12-20-04, 02:40 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
yo im feelin this i really think this shit
was tight could of been betta but good form wha ti been seeing on here |
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12-21-04, 01:49 AM
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IP:
ok thanks for the feed......tell me how i can make it better^^^ dont just say it could be better......uppin for helpful criticism
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12-22-04, 01:12 AM
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No Relation To Tina
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IP:
uppin.......................
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