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Old 12-19-04, 06:01 PM   #1
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Emerica's Finest: Pledge

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Emerica’s Finest
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B.WALLakaILLNESS-
Emerica's Finest we what those cant do and never hesitate tieing our boots
Father's Country in god we trust and may all haters be barried dust to dust
We shoot what others cant shoot and fight for the loot by stickin to roots.
Haters attack like terrorist we hit um back with usa dont fuck with us shit
New to site.little kid want beef we crazy we bite...dont grab gloves cant fight
We tough in Rhyme like Robert Frost and leave ya barried in your own exhaust
Militia straight from the boss and can't hit us too deep better get some floss
Peeps do this for food like bun. We too good so we do this for fun.
Leave enemies without head or finger prints...Every kid wanta grow up be us
I am a soldier sometime cross into blue...i throw bolder and shoot crew
Its B.Wall Emericas Finest...gone awall on your american street set

UnPaveMyPath-
Emerica's Finest Demands Silence Or The Violence All Starts,
Step In The Crew Forum Disruptive And We Might Just All Spark,
Fight Me..... And Ya Ryhme Scheme Will Might Just Falll Apart,
Raise An Eyebrow And Get It Lowered Like A Price At WalMart,

Make A Good Choice Joinin, Im Pointed In The Right Direction,
Ya'll Ain't Sick, And Me? Im Harder Than My Own Erection,
I Stay Loyal Cuz They Loyal, Don't Roll With Treachorous Ways,
I Just Got Suspended For Singin The Same Pledge Everyday..
And It Goes Like.......

Chorus:
I pledge allegiance to the flag,
Of Emerica and the loyalty for which I have,
One nation under God, indivisible,
Bring loyalty, expect justice for each individual..

Elusiv G-
I'll rep dis crew to the death, Do anytin to preserve its rep
We deserev ur respect, if u dnt, its an action you will quickly regret
Full of MC's who can spit, I aint lying or comin from a skewed perspective
we'll build a saga, even if it takes panorama drama, we'll come like piranhas
Smoke your crews, like ur imported straiight fresh from tha bahamas
We a new crew but not harmless, inside dese niggaz heartless
Surrounded by pitch black sky, and clouds of red mist
This is real shit, got fury flowin through our lyrical fists
We'll penetrate ur crews forum premises, And merk any1 claimin 2 be a lyricist
U best keep your eyes peeled, watchin 4 tha steel
Ur fukin wit fam who got heavy shit dats concealed

Big Woody
Emerica, Emerica, Im herr to say, WE HERR TO STAY!
B Woody slays wit tha lyrical AK, I fire away wit no delay
Toe 2 Toe when you provoke us, 4 ya’ll niggas in our way
We make sure you lay, make today be your worst day

Emerica, Emerica, FUCK wit us and you will pay
We don’t fuck wit PUSSIES, but we’re no MJ (Michael Jackson)
Cook these bitches till we smell their flesh decay
Separate your body like water inside an ice tray

Emerica, Emerica, why do you love us so?
Kause our shit flows that keeps spectators at “WHOA”
Im off tha fuckin wall ‘n’ Im always brawl ‘n’
And if we fail...that doesn’t mean we fallin!!

Chorus:
I pledge allegiance to the flag,
Of Emerica and the loyalty for which I have,
One nation under God, indivisible,
Bring loyalty, expect justice for each individual..



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Old 12-19-04, 06:10 PM   #2
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Rhyme scehme in big woodys verse was so fucking basic... if it would've been audio.. it'd be horrible..... the verses dont flow with each other... some are long.. some are small...
just putting wat i think....
overall.... 3/10
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Old 12-19-04, 09:57 PM   #3
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Rhyme scehme in big woodys verse was so fucking basic... if it would've been audio.. it'd be horrible..... the verses dont flow with each other... some are long.. some are small...
just putting wat i think....
overall.... 3/10



true thats what i was going to put


3/10


big woody verse was toooooo basic

elusive g shit was aiiiight

and the rest

elevate


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Old 01-18-05, 05:44 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
true thats what i was going to put


3/10


big woody verse was toooooo basic

elusive g shit was aiiiight

and the rest

elevate


peace

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Eeeeeh, Ya I Gotta Agree...
The Whole Squad Really Needs To Start Stepping Up...
I Mean, B Walla's Ish Didnt Even Rhym Half The Time...
Just About Everyone's Lines Were Streched Beyond Belief...

Uuuuuum, I Like The Actual Structure Of The Piece Though...
Two Person Pattern Then Into The Chorus...
Thats How I Set Up My O.M. When Im Collabin...
But Ya, Big You Really Got Step Up...
You're Ish Was Basic As Anything And It All Lacked Substance...
Like I Couldnt Really Read It And Be Like "Wow I Can Relate"...
Or "Wow Thats Deep He Put Me There" Or Whatever...

So Ya, Stay Up Though And Keep Elevating...
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Old 12-19-04, 09:13 PM   #5
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4 sho, no hate...umm yea

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Old 12-21-04, 05:07 PM   #6
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b more descriptive on feed peeps
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Old 12-21-04, 06:33 PM   #7
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u dumbasses obviously dont no wat West Coast hip hop is about...........................
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Old 12-23-04, 07:13 PM   #8
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thanx mayne^^

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Old 12-23-04, 07:17 PM   #9
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Were is your link..... You have 24 hous... or recieve a warning

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