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07-12-02, 02:24 AM
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newesy drop' YouTh 0f 2dAY '
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 Last edited by JOeY TeRRIFYING : 09-26-02 at 11:42 PM. |
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07-13-02, 12:47 AM
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5 peeps and none replied, i guess thats cool.
joey |
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07-14-02, 12:38 AM
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10 views and no replies, thats kewl
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07-14-02, 04:17 PM
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ok... this peice had a strong message to it... and that message is tru and strong and more people need to learn it... the rymin was good too.. but the flow flucutated WAY to much.. one line that didnt ryme some where, a 3 lines in a row that rymed... if u work out those little peices, that can make the world of a peice..... but good message and good meanin and virtures... keep it flowin
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07-15-02, 12:09 AM
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thank you for that, specialy the crticism. now i can elevate from that.
joey |
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07-19-02, 09:30 AM
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Sorry bout da sleepers
i always got luv fo` ur ish ... no doubt! Diggin dis on da real, i mos def feel wha u spittin here! Much props, Head up ~1~ |
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