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Old 07-12-02, 04:01 AM   #1
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it took 1 min to spit about bitches

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sometimes i hate bitches they cause so much drama/
cause if i wanted to hear naggin i'd call up my mama/
they put you through so much shit , til you flip/
start screaming pick something up and throw that shit/
and you take your anger out on stuff and dont give a fuck who's there/
she makes your nostrils flare/til you reach and grab to pull out your hair/
now you havin thoughts about killing the bitch/
you open ya dresser to find the tech locked with a clip/
your minds runnin rampid thinkin about shit as you gaze at ya weapon/
like coming home no kiss or hug just a nag every second/
(bitch)why dont you buy me anything i feel so poor/
(bitch) why dont you take me out what you dont love me no more?/
and bitches wonder why the men always go out/
cuz we'll kill ourselves if we spend another second in the house/ and if i catch a bitch cheatin , she gettin a beating/ her and the nigga gonna get hollows thats heat seaking/
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Old 07-12-02, 04:05 AM   #2
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not bad i like it cold use a bit more elavation but tat shit was on point yo check my post nledlies feat.Lack of Logic
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Old 07-12-02, 01:03 PM   #3
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iight good looks
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Old 07-12-02, 04:25 PM   #4
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Old 07-13-02, 06:08 PM   #5
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this was aight i feel it could of been better but it was'nt bad
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Old 07-13-02, 07:43 PM   #6
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elementary really, but at least you actually took a direction with your rhymes which barely anyone here does and had a decent sense of rhythm as well.

post on anyway, and keep elavating.
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