Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = Ko

Minimum posts to vote: 170

Check in by: 12-24-04 at 07:34 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

Diplosive has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 07:05 PM.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 07:09 PM.

no one notice ya ill and i know you're hopin to kill-
but Im like too much charcoal-put a hole in ya grill-
i'm laughing at you cuz ya suck, i aint kiddin this cat-
i saw ya girls b-day wishlist she wants her virginity back-
ya dumb and my tech bombs emcees - and ya flex son
cuz Skripts is like mail - he always comes with address on-

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poll checkin.......nice job both of yall

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Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......

uppin this ..2..

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Voted For: Skriptz

have to go with hm becuase here is the throw down
flow skriptz
rhyming tie
opener skriptz
closer skrptz
personals skriptz
and punches skriptz
so over all skriptz.

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Voted For: Diplosive

Lmao...real good battle...Diplosive gets my vote simply for his closer...Shit had me rollin...Both verses had pretty hard punches, but Diplosive out-did Skriptz with his verse...1

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Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz:
ohhh you get this for sure....dope vocab...exepted for you structure lol...flow was iight...your best line was..:
The only way your going spit good is if you got a speech impediment
Listen to your slur, create a spinal tap so I can make your tendons hit

i liked it

Diplosive:
structure:10/10


you were creative but not as Skriptz...you had like the dopess line and the wackess in the same lmao
:i'm laughing at you cuz ya suck, i aint kiddin this cat-(wack)
i saw ya girls b-day wishlist she wants her virginity back(fucking funny)
flow was really good...
close one both of you but i need to go with skrypz

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Voted For: Skriptz

no one notice ya ill and i know you're hopin to kill-
Vote: Skriptz

no one notice ya ill and i know you're hopin to kill-
but Im like too much charcoal-put a hole in ya grill-
meh...ok opener....not a punch tho - 7/10
i'm laughing at you cuz ya suck, i aint kiddin this cat-
i saw ya girls b-day wishlist she wants her virginity back-
wasted filler considerin its only 6line battle...was funny tho - 6.5/10
ya dumb and my tech bombs emcees - and ya flex son
cuz Skripts is like mail - he always comes with address on-
nice original closer, dis was ur best bar man - 8/10[B]

I got to hand it to u being that whack takes serious dedication
Your rhymes wouldn’t be monitored closely...
……………………………..if u were a crack head on probation
[B]humour, originality and it was a punch, gd opener - 8/10
Knock your punches out the way like I put a door near your fists
Midgets like Gary Coleman you still fall short for these spits
ok filler, nuttin gr8, but effective nonetheless - 7/10
The only way your going spit good is if you got a speech impediment
Listen to your slur, create a spinal tap so I can make your tendons hit
mad vocab nicely placed. gd wordplay and concept of punch, nice closer - 8.5/10

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