8 barz
first to 5
first to 3 ko
Due Tommorow

makuem due monday cuz i can't get on until monday again cuz im outta town........i know it's 8 barz but it's a camp an i got no control over cpu use.......

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By 8 barz, do you mean 8 lines or 16 lines, just wanna make sure

8

Steady AKA “Vaginal Agitation”, multiply “rape this pussy”, with assault and aggravation/
Thinks it’s a “game” playing with “toys” he got from Hasbro, this Has-“Bin”, wrap a “towel” around his afro/
This bottom brawler, doesn’t have what it takes, producers, named him “Steady”, cause his skill is opposite “Shakez”/
They say save best for “last”, and I’m just “starting” with this “fool”, don’t make me “laugh”, I “behead” cats after I “teach” em in “summer school”/
I rip cat’s in “twin packs”, like a can of “Pringles”, you and your boyfriend for your avatar, so you obviously ain’t “single”/
Both of you dressin in Elvis and Hula girl outfits like Lilo and “Stitch”, and I don’t got to know you, even “Aliens” can tell you’s a bitch/
And I ain’t talkin about “Alf” yo, this “bitch” has to “dial 10-10-220” and order himself more “Alpo”/
A “Garden Snake”, I spit “venom” on cowards and hoes, and stomp him “flat”, like advertisements for that new “Garden Hose”/

i seen more bitch in you then a dawg in heat...u neva seen a W u only seen da'feet(defeat/
since u a clown i juggle lyrics an hit u at random/
u spit like a 5 yr old so ya ryhmez towardz me was a childhood TANTRUM/
your a unknown lyricist basiclly your in same brackets as an opera phantom/
even if u where feed viagra pillz ya style still couldn't stand up/
your brain is more of a toddler then tha bran of clothz osh-kosh/
i see u tried your hardest to my medium flow an still lost/
your styles a disappointment like jackinoff a thousand of babys was lost(get it???lol)/

Uppin for votes

metas : onslaught
flow : onslaught
internal rhymes : onslaught

onslaught totally fuckin took this battle....and what the fuck is steady talkin about?.....jackin offf babies of some shit?.....thats fuckin whack dawg......one......

Uppin

ONSLAUGHT WON THIS BATTLE HANDS DOWN..BETTER FLOW AND METAS....OVERALL BETTER VERSE

VOTE=ONSLAUGHT

"i seen more bitch in you then a dawg in heat...u neva seen a W u only seen da'feet(defeat/"-

Because of that line Steady, you lose, thtshit is older the life.

My vote=Onsluaght

3-0 My way, that'd be a Ko, nice battle V.a

And thanks to everyone who took thier time, to read, and post on this battle, I appreciate it

Peace