"Where You At?" _ Sick Nasty M.C _ 2 stylez .. 1 sound

Verse 1
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yo, where you at? the whole damn city behind us/
we in da ally so they cant find us/
when they do we gettin jumped, shotty pumped, and im ready to fire/
read tha paper, sick nasty m.c. for hire/
duckin and weavin/
we aint leavin/
throwin hooks, jabs, and knock-out blows/
you seen it bfore, so you know how it goes/
us vs. them, so we gonna be victorious/
15 strong, all of us fuckin warriors/
dice, sick and D.A so how can we lose/
we all nerved up, so we sip a lil boose/
now we loose as a goose/
and you look as fat as a moose/
look im rhymin, rhymin like dr. suese/
Put yo head in a knuce/
fuck makin a Truce/
it aint no use/
cuz we sippin Killa Juice/
One dead, 2 dead, 3 bodies found/
4 feet, 5 feet, 6 feet underground/
Homocide Po-Po, tracin my Calls/
listenin to tha bass as it rises, and as it falls/
bitch, we got balls/
so we ride on 50 to 10/
we dont back down, you gotta go thru me and my men/
10 strong, 20 strong, it dont matter/
decapitated bitches, servin they head on a platter/
cuz they was talkin Chit-chatter/
im tha lead off batter/
and im swingin first/
first one to step up, get it tha worse/

HooK
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SICK NASTY, SICK NASTY, fake G's shoot at me, then drive past me, why
they wanna blast me when they aint even gotta gat? oh shit, he packin
+yo ACES were you at?!+

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lol Damn lol that Shit was Hot no doubt 9/10 good punches and everything "decapitated bitches, servin' they head on a platter" i'm tellin' you i like that line

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THE ART OF WAR

this was nothin compared to wut i'll write...copywritten?...lol...i wouldn't need to steal it anyway...but this wasn;t all that good either...4/10

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Net Record(56-9)

RV Record(13-3)

Overall Record
69-12

man dont even worry i wouldnt steal dis shit even if i was desperate in was so fuckin whack u need to improve on evey fuckin thing lmmfao

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ouch harsh fbak so far

but they on point jus being mean about it

-fix ur structure
-less gangsta bullshit
-elevate in ur vocab
-more creatiev in ur lines - come wit sum bars that are truly orginal
-Read OMB's tutorial
"thumbup:

RTF on my battle against Assasin or "The Colour OF LIfe"-links in sig

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^^LMFAO..........it's true though.....that's why it's so funny too

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Net Record(56-9)

RV Record(13-3)

Overall Record
69-12

aight i got some mixed reviews about hat verse, but no lie thats just the biggining ill hit yall up with some real lyrical shit .. peace

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