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Old 07-14-02, 06:14 PM   #1
synickle
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"FrEe StYlE from the heart"

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Yo like Fabolous 1 click and 2 sparks/niggaz be dissin' you like freestyle friday on 106 & Park/Synickle always at the top of the chart/before i come thru you prepare like Noah's Ark/Ya girl mouth can be my Louis and my dick can be her Clark/I come thru wit my rhymes bein efficent/if Fabolous is Fabolous then i'm Magnificent/I got Phat rhymes like Phat got Farms/don't write no rhymes cuz it won't do you harm/the only way you're gonna beat me is wit a lucky charm/see its funny ya rhymes is like proteins and minerals/give me some milk and i'll eat it like cereal/I know you like the way the Sin dissin' without intermission/i ain't even got to you yet but i still for filled my mission.
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Old 07-14-02, 09:08 PM   #2
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NOT THE GREATEST BUT DEFINETLY WORTH READING KEEP HITTING IT HARD YOU GOT THE POTENTIAL
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Old 07-15-02, 07:04 AM   #3
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lackin a lot here kid, lines like this

"I got Phat rhymes like Phat got Farms"

makes ya shit very simplistic.. ..try to put more vocab. and complexity in ya spit.. ..keep spittin


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Old 07-15-02, 07:23 AM   #4
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needs work homeboy.....

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how you gon' be from NY and spit like that...come on now..you can do much better than you did..
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