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01-04-05, 11:18 PM | #1 | ||
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The TakeOver(R.V. breakdown)
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Intro,im back,and loaded crushin any mc any crew in my stands
so basically its fuck everybody who ain't running with me LETS GO!!!!!!!!! the takeover kill snakes wit bullets and leave em stoned over murder these mc's for actin like fake soldiers,, die slower empty niggas out and sit em down like cup holders.(load up) im ill(homie)i spit past the margin,split niggas in part N's (get it)face on the obituary fuck the milk cartons(oh yeah) steppin over the site like pordon.im just more harden mc's fail when they aim at me for super stardom(hurt em) so face it,im high as a ny skyscraper best in lyrical phases can't replace this(are you stupid)ya niggas is basic(like cable) im straped with hard times,and slave days haterit flow so bladed ya mc's still in the dark like lost cave men,not 50 i kill many men.what a pen(im the fuckin best) cuz lets not get physical yo son it would be nothing for me to get rid of you/,bitch slap thru rhymes and watch cats wordplays snap run laps on ya'll undersize the whole site like unlocked caps(haahahahah) check the facts or get your neck facin the axe spit bullets wars and have your body a throwback. LOOK my status rules,some say a NAS mind wit JAY-Z attitude, so let me drop ether and roc some fellas dude ya through(come on came up from the roots,gunz poorness,thugs mamis and timb boots i waist no time when its on i just shoot put death in you so who want it.WHAT CREW?its the takeover i take em out signle handed i only give luv if granted souls abandon(just vansih)ya don't get me like speakin spanish im loco loco(que que)ham ass niggas get sandwiched/ have your mustard all over the board i talk raw make lungs like cold slaw(oh shit)you want beef show me some I.D like corner stores/ no under minded mc's F-A-B-O-L-O-U-S-just breatheeeeeeeee i got more then tricks up my sleeve, more like rhymes guns every weapon to make any nigga bleed/ i'll never leave,always comeback take the thrown back wit ease ya niggas is like a females touch son just a tease(whoa) who beatin me NOT YOU ,NA NOT YOU,(the whole site can hate me i thug my way thru) LAST CALLOUT i guess you can say im unsigned HYPE right? scribe got the source in flowz im to nice(ya like 2,3,,4,,5,when i roll dice if you say you a live wire,get spliced,with a knife JAMAICA QUEENS 149 st now in the lime light. yo my mind touch niggas soon to touch figuers, and all you other cats throwin shots at scribe you only get half a bar FUCK YA NIGGAS. nuff said.i got the war paint on. ~Sin~ Scribe u have 24 hours to drop a link or this will be closed.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871
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Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war overral rec-19-13-12- aka R.I.S.E. album done-One Vision 2nd album commin soon/ think spiritual,and the heaven will come and with that said you can never lose/ the scribe Last edited by intensify effect : 01-07-05 at 11:51 AM. |
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01-04-05, 11:32 PM | #2 | ||
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mad flow dogg
nice multies 2 Nice structure very easy to read and understand Im feeling the ( ) good job
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01-04-05, 11:37 PM | #3 | ||
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much Luv son,respect
~Sin~ Scribe
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Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war overral rec-19-13-12- aka R.I.S.E. album done-One Vision 2nd album commin soon/ think spiritual,and the heaven will come and with that said you can never lose/ the scribe |
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01-04-05, 11:49 PM | #4 | ||
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uppin for feedback
~sin~ Scribe
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Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war overral rec-19-13-12- aka R.I.S.E. album done-One Vision 2nd album commin soon/ think spiritual,and the heaven will come and with that said you can never lose/ the scribe |
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01-05-05, 07:52 PM | #5 | ||
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stop sleepin,and drop feedback.
~Sin~ Scribe
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Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war overral rec-19-13-12- aka R.I.S.E. album done-One Vision 2nd album commin soon/ think spiritual,and the heaven will come and with that said you can never lose/ the scribe |
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01-05-05, 07:55 PM | #6 | ||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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king of new york??? lmaoo chill dunny
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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM. This thread has been automatically closed." ^^he's scared.lol |
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01-05-05, 08:00 PM | #7 | ||
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act like you know B,
~Sin~ The Scribe
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Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war overral rec-19-13-12- aka R.I.S.E. album done-One Vision 2nd album commin soon/ think spiritual,and the heaven will come and with that said you can never lose/ the scribe |
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01-05-05, 09:08 PM | #8 | |
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I agree with djp, nice multis, and flow is solid and so is structure, even got some punches in there :P, i liked the verses targeting different things yet keepin to the structure and idea, nice style and good piece
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01-06-05, 11:11 PM | #9 | ||
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thx for the respect,uppin for more feedback
~Sin! Scribe
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Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war overral rec-19-13-12- aka R.I.S.E. album done-One Vision 2nd album commin soon/ think spiritual,and the heaven will come and with that said you can never lose/ the scribe |
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01-07-05, 11:57 AM | #10 | |
Banned
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u have 24 hours to drop a link or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 |
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