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Old 07-15-02, 04:06 PM   #1
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True passion lover

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my true love is like a full grown rose but without the thorns/
wearing my heart on my sleeve you can see that it is already worn/
from the ups and downs winter snow and the summer rains/
I cant get you out of my system like my souls is trapped boudn by chains/
I love you girl more than anything I know and I hope hope holds you in my arms forever more/
Your bodies hitting like Roy Jones jr/
well can i get knocked out/
I wanna show you something let you know what im about/
*heres a thought*
A nite of passion me and you doing the love tango till the morning/
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Old 07-15-02, 05:42 PM   #2
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(dis iz PAPISWIFEY)i was feelin dis and i liked dis one a lil mo than tha othas but i dont know why! either way u got talent so keep it up! respect.

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Old 07-16-02, 01:18 PM   #3
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no doubt!! dis was hott. good lookn out on my piece dats luv, imma keep u posted. $1oo
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Old 07-16-02, 01:27 PM   #4
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Damn..you had some deep bars..

>wearing my heart on my sleeve you can see that it is already worn/

this was a tight piece..ill keep an eye out for more of ya ish...stay up..
peace.
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Old 07-16-02, 02:22 PM   #5
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thx for the feedback
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Old 07-16-02, 10:38 PM   #6
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Aye dat waz coo keep droppin yo shit
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Old 07-16-02, 11:29 PM   #7
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Hm...

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This was a decent piece. It started off really well and then kinda fell off at the end. But the thought was kinda different from other people's. Which made the piece for appealing. Holla.
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Old 07-18-02, 08:02 AM   #8
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was a nice piece...was a bit off at times...but cos it seemed to heart felt....and cos i personally feel what you are saying...i liked it a lot...respect...
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Old 07-19-02, 10:23 AM   #9
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Damnz shoulda kept it goin,
feelin it mos def ...
ima sucka fo` da love ish ...
Keep spittin da real,

pz
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