Lawyer:: Do you swear to tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth?
Tru:: I don't thank ya'll ready for it, but yea, I do..
Lawyer:: Where were you last week at about twelve o clock?
Tru:: I was on the block tryna get a shot from this cute cop...
Lawyer:: Stop. I thought you said you was at home in bed..
Tru:: Yea that's what I said but I had lied so moms wouldn't be mad.
Lawyer:: Is it not true that at approixmently at 12:15//you killed this officer while he was on post readin a magazine
Tru:: THAT MAN WAS A SICK BITCH THAT MOLESTED HIS KIDS!!//YOU KNOW THAT HE DID, THAT'S WHY HIS SOCIAL WORKER JOB WAS PUT AT END!
Lawyer:: You have no proof of these accustions and your gettin off the trial//I asked you did you kill him, ANSWER THE QUESTION NOW!!
Tru:: Oh what you think I'm gonna lie, you dont need proof I'll tell ya//As a father he was a faila(failer) and he a offcier, the top Jailier
Lawyer:: Are you ever gonna get to the point here Miss?
Tru:: So I killed him!//I took the knife and stabbed it way up in em!
Lawyer:: So you admitt that you killed this policeman//you admitt you stabbed him with YOUR very own hands?
Tru:: I admitt that I put a end to that child's fucked up life//you shoulda seen the terror and fear up in his eyes, right before he died
Lawyer:: What if I told you that that man had been tried?//What if I told you that that little girl lied?
Judge:: So Miss Williams, what do you have to say about your misttake...
Tru:: Oops... I kill the otha man tonight if you want...
Judge:: Lock her away..
Tru:: Shit I knew you was gonna say that....

i dont know wut dat was all about but dat was interesting. either way i thought it was good and its suntin different and we need sum change around here! much love. one

(dis ya girl PAPISWIFEY by tha way, just borrowing a friends login name)

hmm i liked it...it was like a mini story..keep it up girl..much luv..God bless..1..

not tryna look down on my own poem but I really dont ike this..
had no emotion, no skill, no knowledge, and no thinking at all..
just boredome....
lol
so I'd preciate advice cuzz you neva know what you'd hit up...
I rate this poem 2/10..
I coulda did betta but whateva wasn't feelin it

thnkx for replies..

HuNNeD

Mad crazy..dat's all I have to say..well not really. lmao Um..it was well written and i'm definitely loving the twists. Holla.

Ur ish always original ...
thats why i like it sooo much ...

Dont down ur work so much,
just keep spittin ...

Pz
~1~