Just cuz you can rhyme, it doesn’t mean you can rap too,
I ought to smack you if you rap dudes thought saying that you clap tools was what you had to do to win battles,
You need punches, metaphors, similes, multis, and word play,
Though most importantly, it has to make sense and flow when each row of verbs’ sprayed,
I’m tire of low lifes who don’t flow right, and still wanna shine more than glow light on cold nights,
You gotta have more vocab to go grab attention like porno mags, and have metas’ like morhisis and word play like scrabble,
Each day I ravel on hopping someone listens to these moral facts,
Each rap has to prove points like Iverson with sharp pencils, and hit hard against fools like big boulders, and not lil pebbles,
Plus use everyday items to grab attentions like this smart rebel, my raps be so deep that thry make souls weeps and hearts tremble,
Also don’t bite, or use simplistic words, rhymes, and phrases, let ya lines be creative, so you can bring heat like the superb mind of Satan,
And to all those confused, or still hating…I address these spits at you, you probably the reason why I wrote this, since you dicIC ride like penis saddles,
And to those heads who sleep and say threads be weak…, How bout ya elevate first, give tips on each verse,
and if you bored…do something besides lay in ya beds and sleep, why don’t you wakeup and instead just peep,
Try to stop the hating, riding, sleeping, and weakness, start getting active, supportive, and truthful as soon you read this,
Boards would be better if peeps started using this thread as a guideline, before I cut out each of ya left brains and leave ya heads with the right minds,
If you didn’t even read this script, don’t post just to do it, cuz truth is, this message is exclusive, and I hope it got a fuse lit,
Otherwise this spit was useless, and its obvious ya cruel kids don’t give at least 2 shyts,
Notice that I’m not new to this, so I can prove it, that this guide helps elevate old and new kids to do this, and spit shyt iller than putrid,
I hope many heads read this and enjoyed my latest textual script, from str8 to bisexual kids, I want this message to spread faster then diseases protected from latex sexual dicICS (H.I.V)



not really carring so much bout vocab and shyt on this..just more with the message and rhyme scheme..<<trying to PRove A point..nah mean...i really hope this thread ends up being used wisely and not clogged like other threads with bullshyt<<depending on result of this is depending on me keep dropping for scripts...or me going to audio...etc..read...peep..reply..post...spread the news through words and links...<<<doin this for ya...not for me

i deefinetly feel what chu sayin potna...keep that mc ed...coming..oh yeah and that line about niggz who rhyme..in t"text"'..dont mean they caan flow..is a 100% true.along wit tha rest of ya lyricz..good job comarado

GREAT JOB ALL AROUND

every one on ths board should peep this

Yeh this is nice and is hella true, mosly to the texters, im a texter on here, but do audio... It was strong and powerful on some lines and deep in others... The rhyme scheme was quicc, come acorss well, sometimes found it choppy, more multies woulda been nicer... Wordplay and technical words worked well together, your technical words were important here and ya combined em well in your verse... This is nice, good concept and well explored, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...

mighty impressed with the importance of this thread..hmmm

look you defeaten the purpose mess with me I leave my glock busting take you off this earth leave yo body hurtin put you in a hurst body peers 6feet in the dirt thats how I was taught the let my shit go ah sparking If any nigga step to me Iam bout letin my 223 start talking spitin hot shit that rip thru yo skin at any time all I carry is a nine I 'll put 2 shots to yo dome 3shots to yo body thats 5shots I hit you with ain't no hesitation in my generation or my nation niggaz hatten aginst me and my niggaz we show no fear to any nigga who wants to spill me I can't let ah nigga steal me thats why I stay strapped 24/7 ah week ready to blast any nigga who wantah step me i'll knock u off yo feet leave brains on the street after L'll hit with that heat you'll think u micheal jackson or richard pryor when hit u with that k that shoot blue fire