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Old 01-10-05, 03:10 PM   #1
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Just Quick Verse

Will Eventually Be Full Song

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Old 01-10-05, 05:08 PM   #2
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make ur vocals a lil higher, ur quality is ok
i liked ur flow and lyrics were dope like ussual
emotion was good for the track, and im kinda feeln dis beat

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Old 01-10-05, 05:24 PM   #3
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nice track u sound a lil shaky on the mic....lyrics coo....beat i really like nice track again stay up yo
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Old 01-11-05, 02:04 PM   #4
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uppin this

thx for feedback, i've upped my lyric vol 20

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Old 01-12-05, 05:28 PM   #5
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Old 01-12-05, 05:37 PM   #6
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itll be doper once i hop on it lol
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Old 01-12-05, 05:47 PM   #7
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^^lol..... i need to work on our collab twenty, in a lil' while.. but yea, premanition BOUT time u came back to audio.. i was feelin the beat, flow was aight, lyrics were str8, just wish i could hear some more of that....... you have a nice voice for the track, i wanna hear it when it's finished.. stay up, y'all................
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Old 01-24-05, 01:03 PM   #8
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Old 01-24-05, 01:11 PM   #9
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was feelin it...mobb deep beat is str8 classic...where in UK u from?
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Old 01-30-05, 12:38 PM   #10
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Old 01-30-05, 01:12 PM   #11
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sounds good.. lyrics are alright. flow is good.. u still need work on delivery though...
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