what's wit all tha sleepin'..is it that i'm weak..or yall mutha fuckuz jus' missin..out on what the Don is speakin..soo this freestyle..i'll be reachin-out..callin-out...all RB MC'z...freeze..please stop watch and listen...

(replies would be appreeciated..)



Tha only time i hot-box..
is when i'm battlin' demons..
on these streets they got..-glocks-to-pop..
but i once read that its wisdom over weapons..
listen..i'm here to teach my peers a few lessons..
Tha only time i hot-box...
is goin' round fa round..wit punches in hell..
until i prevail by knockin..the Devil out..
and i shall excel..i will not fail..
this fa all my people brutalized and fatali-tized..
by the beast police..
fuck the hate..we need to increase-the-peace..
and decrease-tha-fakes..lackin spiritual-weight...
fuck the hate..we need to increease-the-peace..
live life and find love..even if it seem impossible..
you need to live life and find love..
words from the heaven sent Apostle..

thats a freestyle..i was playin around wit it..trying something a lil new..wit the repetitions..

damn..could a nigga get a reply..some feedback..on what i can improve..yall quit sleepin..i ain't sleepin on yall..

you got good skillz the only thing wrong is your content..
i think i can speak for everybody when i say that im not feelin that make peace and save our ghettos shit.
another thing is that you should really work on stickin to one topic instead of jumpin around to talkin bout so much shit......just a little constructive critisism

i did that on purpose..jus' tryin' somethin' out..but thanks..uppin