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Into the catacombs of something or the other it goes...


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dat was real deep-so deep i dont even know if i undastand it fully, quite yet...but i was really feelin it...waitin fa mo. much luv and respect.

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very nice imagry so you gettin slept on too huh.........go figur eal lthe ill ones are.........but im impressed like usual wit your iah darneck beautiful is the word .....plus wolves mah fave animals lol brownie points lol nice drop hunn il lbe back sum day to up it HAZY

no matter what, ur peices always seem to amaze me in their depth and words.... dude, it was beautiful... amazin imagry and the flow was awesome... DAMN FREEKING SLEEPPERS WAKE UR ASSES UP! grrr... lol. sorry... but i loved this peice...every word, every syllable was complete in its self... adn this peice was deeper than i could ever and will ever go... amazin... no fave lines cuz i loved it all... keep it flowin

wasup... this is me fo real that peice was full of beautiful imagry... I've always felt like you were on some pedistool of poets & everyone else was just tryin to be as good as you... I don't know that's just my mind's picture of you... everything you write has a deep feeling & it takes you to a "blank page" where you write the setting, surroundings & every other detail with your words, your poetry is amazing, every peice I've ever read by you has been... I love it! I hope to see more

Damn, let me just say, you do imagery like few others..every piece of yours got that cinema visualization from the descriptiveness of your words..not to mention deep messages n inspiring content..feelin this..stay up n keep blessin us..peace.

hey....thanks for the comments all...appreciate them most definetly....- Hazy, wolf eh?...heh...interesting... - ...

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At first I thought the title said "beating off the wolf". But alas it's not. (Although I know this one guy who said he saw another guy beat off a tiger. Um, thats prolly more information than anyone needed to know.)

Like everyone else is basicly saying this peice drips with tightness. I like taking things at face value so I automaticly assume your being literall. Of course I know better and this is probably a metaphor for something. After all when a wolf is no longer a part of it's pack it's usually because it's off to start a new pack or is too old to do anything. (I used to kinda like studying wolves.)

Of course that part about wanting to tear down the moon must have had some importance. After all most people think the moon and wolves have some sort of special meaning. (Howling at the moon, werewolves and the full moon.)

I'm assuming that this wolf is either an upper-middle class wolf that got everything it ever wanted and for the sake of being cool is rebelling against it's parents and law.

Or it's a wolf that was most likely abused either by it's parents or the circumstances of it's life. And is basicly being almost forced to rebel against parents and law, not to be cool, but to just simpy "be".

Am I right or way off?

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

^^^^^^^^^^^^for ya

thanks for the uppin shaynea...




Necro - larf@beating off a tiger...(!!!!)...

...you have some good points though..and i guess that is one way it can be interpreted...but not the meaning i was personally trying to get through...

....but saying that...poetry is something which you dig as deep...or not so deep as you want/can....its all good....anyway.....respect for the comments...

Damnz, deep ish boo ..
Was powerful had much depth,
and raw content ...
Always diggin ur ish,
dope!

Props ...
Loved da 1st 2 verses the most,

Pz
~1~

respect for the comments dime...appreciated...

damn dog ya gonna make me dig. i can feel how this peice can be flipped with human nature. on how we live so cut throat with a sytem that many copywrite 'eat or be eaten.' also you can pick it with the power of one rule on how life can be switched up by anyone or anybody its all up 2 you andhow committed you are. also gettin a lil hits of threw any amount of curlty theres still a concience in us all. but im just droppin my 2 cents into it. but if im hittin ya dead on with inner meanin i think i shouyld win a prize wit a collab or sumptin.

peace out, joey

kind of Joey...got bits of the perspetive/meaning i personally was writing it from..but as i said before...peeps can get there own meaning from it....

collab? i would...but damn i havent done one in ages...just not a collab type...but appreciate the offer most def...respect for the comments (and for digging so deep)...

i feel ya on that varentaro. im not the collab type either. i just wantd to see if i could keep up with ya with sum creative concept. cause im hitin sum writers block.