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Old 01-14-05, 04:22 AM   #1
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Calamity Feat. OneManBand - Im Fallin

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Old 01-14-05, 05:02 AM   #2
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I've had a crazy crazy life...

Aiight nice beat for starters, first verse nice flow, vocals are good, like the quality.. Hoops get at me for a collab or I'll strangle you with a mic cord..

OMB, you seemed to be more hyped in this shit.. I liked it bruh.. We gotta do another collab soon for sure..

Hot drop muf fuckas.. Good shit..
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Old 01-14-05, 05:20 AM   #3
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any way back to the song....


1st: you was aight not your best shit,....needs lots more emotion
but good lyrics and nice vocab

2nd. nice lyrics......i know you go tthe emotion but you failed to use it agian......i liked your lyrics but after awhile i got bored

3rd. dont like a this flow.....your style doesnt match CALAM....i get lost in oyur flow...cant find your rhymes........nice spit tho...i liked what you where talking baout just coudlnt find the rhymes


all in all calma made this track hot......good but not your best...

well im comparing this to a millon eyes so this was actaully very nice...

by the way a million eyes was eztra nice...lol

7.5/10
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Old 01-14-05, 05:22 AM   #4
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Aiyo...have that chipmunk Bitch at the beginning say "MY NAME IS THA Q"...lol...j/k


who ever rapped 1st did a good job...but it wud be even hotter with more inner multies...and more doubles on ur voice...but vocally, it worked...and it flowed well with the beat



2nd cat...A NOS knock off?...hmmm...tone loc wanna-be?...i'm not feelin the voice or the flow...sounds like u stumblin over ur words...or bumblin either way, it was ass...


So, I'd say 1st cat nice...2nd cat, NOT...


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Old 01-14-05, 05:51 AM   #5
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Beat...not feelin much...but the vocals made up for this...Calam i don't listen to much of your stuff but yea u were cool nice job.

OMB...emotion really pickin up now stretched a lil in areas but i feel ya rode the beat nicely...was a good verse from ya...

Nice song from both keep em comin
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Old 01-14-05, 09:26 AM   #6
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song was pretty dope yo
first time i heard calamity use voice overs, they need a lil work
but sounding iight
OMB your quality was pure ASSSSSSS!!! got a good mic or some mixing stills yo
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Old 01-14-05, 10:55 AM   #7
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that was calam that mixed it.... i have a shure sm58
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Old 01-14-05, 12:27 PM   #8
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yea lol... im tryna get into using Voice Overs i guesss.. make is sound more professional... first time i ever used em.. be nice *cry cry*..and its his Quality lol.. cause i mix aight..
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Old 01-14-05, 03:00 PM   #9
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yeh bruv keep up the good work, maybe we can collab...agen
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Old 01-14-05, 03:47 PM   #10
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i hate that chipmunk voice in beats.
Dunno why people like it. Its so corny an tacky.

Calamity, U had some real nice flo and quality.
Like I always said.
Good lyrics as well, ur like the one person I cant say nuttin wrong about.
except.....it doesnt seem like ur type of track.


OMB.....
ya flow was way to slow....and off at times....
ya voice seemed to low. Sorry, not feelin ya style,
Just doesnt seem polished and confident.
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Old 01-14-05, 11:57 PM   #11
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Good look Nick ^... uppin
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Old 01-15-05, 06:04 AM   #12
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ye ya flow was to low.... first guy was tight man tight lyrics and the flow was good.. chipmunk was kinda anooyin me... third guy flow was falling off kinda ......... the beat is aiight kinda feelin it.. except for that chipmunk.....overall 7.5/10....
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Old 01-15-05, 11:14 AM   #13
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the chipmunk = Mariah Carey? in that voice or sumthin.. i swear i heard that chorus sumhow, well she got annoying before the second verse started lol but i really liked the beat.. Calamity had some tight lyrics.. flow and delivery was nice.. the production part of this was pretty good.. One Man Band i liked ya lyrics too, you fell off a couple times in ya flow but hopped back on like a soldier.. i think y'all both did pretty good overall..
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Old 01-17-05, 07:08 PM   #14
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this was good... calamity sounded real nice, sounded like there was one part where you rushed half a line to keep the rhymes goin- other than that I was feelin it... track was real mellow- omb came on nice- sounded like you might have fallin off a couple times on it- but all in all it was a nice peice... but it didn't have the emotion I would have expected for the beat... sounds like a track deadly would go nuts on... keep droppin..1
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