Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
|
01-24-05, 11:33 AM | #1 | |
Classic
|
Everything
IP:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1915919
Millionare kid, with a heavy sin to bare with Left the house crying, running to his therapist Yearning for the couch his heavy heart can lay on To search for his childhood vandalized with crayons He's got EVERYTHING, bitches in his bed moaning Money buys hoes, but never love for the lonely Money buys cars, but he's going no where really Money lies to stars, so they cant see clearly Faces of Benjamin Franklin, mean nothing to him Not wen he's in a pot so hot you can make stew in Honestly this kid is FUCKED UP, I noe you thinkin why He's got EVERYTHING, but wakes up hoping to die His father..... directs porn, and LOVES money, a slave of its worth His mother..... a broken plastic like the condom that gave him birth His friends.... Wallet heavy but empty inside with deep dispair His teachers... All love him, but without money, they wouldnt care Harvard is a place to him, nothing big, its all good And this kid's idea of hood, is Ebonix he understood Things are goin well? Then why live in such torment Its coz his plate's full, but his spoons are all bent He grew up a racist, a known bigot of all nationalities Puttin down other melanin with a justified rationality He's got EVERYTHING, but he cries his pillow to sleep And he counts demons lurking instead of counting sheep If he's got EVERYTHING, then damn, i must be perfect Coz im happier then him but im out here still workin
__________________
|
|
01-24-05, 02:30 PM | #2 | |
Classic
|
IP:
upppppppin on feed
__________________
|
|
02-07-05, 08:34 PM | #3 | ||
Is F'in Bored
|
IP:
A look inside the life of a rich kid eh. I really don't sympathize but it was a good poem. People are so quick to judge anyone because of their outside appearance they never look any deeper and it's good you did. it puts you in his position and normally you'd feel sorry for him but my emotions died a long time a go so....i don't. The poem was good but i didn't like the ending. The emotion coming out was good but all of a sudden there's just this curve where you throw yourself into this poem when i was expecting the poem to end with some kind of resolution but it just kind of trailed off like the ending of freddy vs. jason. Anyway good poem still. keep it up
__________________
My SpellBook Fuck being creative, you guys have certainly given up on it
GET DOPER Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak The Legend of Blackmage Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!Coming soon to a soundclick near you...
........Shit.....Nigga.......
|
||
02-18-05, 05:28 PM | #4 | ||
Banned: Cheating
|
IP:
i would like 2 have had it like that.....lol but on the real i like the concept even tho i can't relate 2 it u took me on a visual journey of that life & u got potential keep it up
make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic |
||
06-15-05, 09:35 PM | #5 | ||
New to RV
|
IP:
His father.....
directs porn, and LOVES money, a slave of its worth His mother..... a broken plastic like the condom that gave him birth i like that ..that was my favorite lines |
||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|