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07-19-02, 02:22 PM | #1 | |
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"the Abyss" Crazy Shyt Peep Dis
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Standing on the precipice of love,
well, what disguises itself as love to those who know not (ignorant/blind to the qualities thereof) as I was saying… standing on the edge of inexperience, misconception, no direction (subsequently, NO protection) ~ as if we need to protect ourselves… see, we be like, sleep walking fast talking ourselves into the unknown but it don't have to be so others have gone this way befo & lived to tell about the living hell inside life's deepest, darkest well of that bottomless pit of the ego trip the ugly underbelly of vain glory (can a sista TELL the story?) of the flip side of the joy ride… the domestic violence the miseducation the NON sense the "BUT I LUV HIM" syndrome wheneva he goes upside yo dome the neverending nightmare of PO leece cars when they sirens blare wakin neighbors all times of night another ghetto nikka fight & neva wanna let tha charges stick can't STAND to be without tha~dikk… cycle, vicious life? HELL! love? WHAT? then death… oh well we stand upon the precipice of something that could be everything beautiful if we would but look before we leap into the deep abyss… |
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07-19-02, 02:36 PM | #2 | |
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very crazy indeed kin ahad a nice flow going though was feelin it ........maybe you should take a nap and get this kinda ish outta your head lol
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07-19-02, 03:50 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
so i be a crazy nigg. thnx 4 holdin me down anywayz lol. 100
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07-19-02, 11:29 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
This poem took me away ...
such rawness , had real depth & meaning ... Props Fav linessee, we be like, sleep walking fast talking ourselves into the unknown but it don't have to be so others have gone this way befo & lived to tell about the living hell inside life's deepest, darkest well Keep doin ur thang, Pz ~1~ |
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07-21-02, 07:24 AM | #5 | |
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fookin 'ell...this was a piece and a half...
...like you were sailing on the edge...the bordeline if you would...but you pulled it off for sure... ...had some real depth to it....at times it seemed too deep within yourself for most to comprehend...which is all good..(cos that happens a lot with me too).... anyway..heavy piece...respect... |
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07-21-02, 11:58 AM | #6 | |
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that was amazin' i had a friend who had the "but I love him syndrom" he put her in the hospital a few times, she learned tho... that was a powerful peice, it was like you knew both sides & felt from every angle, Veiwpoints. I was feeing this peice, it was deep, peace boo
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07-21-02, 05:44 PM | #7 | |
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i like that ish...oh by the way im starting to see everyone edits or at least some edit thier cussing...do i need to edit mine...
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07-21-02, 10:01 PM | #8 | |
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this was a trip had a crazy flow mixxed into it. the actual peice has mad wordplay into it. tight stuff stay up.
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07-21-02, 11:27 PM | #9 | |
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thanx yall nuttin but luv keep UPPIN!!!!!!!!1
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