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07-19-02, 03:52 PM | #1 | |
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Nate verse 1;1
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Im Bein analytical,
When I say Bein Original,Is critical, My life is controlled by all thats biblical,never political,when reachin my pinnacle, I stay guided by the Testaments,Neva Lead by the Presidents, When I bleed I never rinse,Cause scars are sins evidence, Who needs Earth Heaven Has all benefeits,Dont listen to the republican 'elephants', They Just worried about their salary,Their speaches are at the canopy,of a sinnisters Gallery, So when they speak I just Wont Listen,Sins already glisten,And Im My own Christian, Judgement day is here I know The Verdict,Hell is over populated Cause Nobodies perfect, But if you ask for Jesus to cleanse,and you get accepted just plead for your friends, This is my Bible I speak it Through Pens.......... Ay this is my first Poetic Scripture Inmy Life.....And In a way Imm startin My own Bible |
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07-19-02, 03:54 PM | #2 | |
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yo ur wordplay wass good and the flow was on. also it was some deepshyt. keep writin doggy uno
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07-19-02, 04:42 PM | #3 | |
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Thankx Im also Lookin Fo more Replies From People That Know Whut they're talkin about like you Varentao,Dime,ya know...Thankx holla
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07-19-02, 05:05 PM | #4 | |
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hmm....interesting piece for sure...had some real depth to it....even though it would be more suited to Open Mic maybe....it was still a nice piece...
...good word play....flowed with a certain 'zig zag' like style to it....(which is good)...i would say a good introduction to the poetic scriptures...(!?!?!)....keep them coming...would like to see more poetic styled pieces though...but its all good.... ...respect.... |
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07-19-02, 05:26 PM | #5 | |
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Yo O, that was pretty nice....keep droppin' 'em like that.
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07-20-02, 12:03 AM | #6 | |
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eYo Supz,
Sorry i didnt reply earlier ... havent been able to log on to RB Tight vocab ... Keep spittin da realness ... Powrful poem no doubt! Pz ~1~ |
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07-20-02, 12:10 AM | #7 | |
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Thanks Uppin I was The Kid HoZ Am I down Fo Round Two In the Poetry Tourney
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07-20-02, 02:08 PM | #8 | |
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Still Uppin Fo Criticism.....
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07-21-02, 10:19 PM | #9 | |
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Uppin To the Poetic Sleepers.......
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07-23-02, 03:30 PM | #10 | |
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STILL UPPIN......
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07-24-02, 05:55 AM | #11 | |
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DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN YOU UPPIN. anywayz im returning ya the favor on seeing how ya talent been uppd and i gots to say ya have mastered the syntax of the internal and multi rhyme scheme. this was nice. i think more suted for open mic, but i aint hatin. also liked how ya fliped the religion up in this. never knew that side of ya. either way stay up. peace.
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07-25-02, 01:40 PM | #12 | |
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Thankx JoEy....Uppin...
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