pimpin....
the game aint as hard as this game i been playin
two girls on the brain, dont know which ones stayin
dont like either, so im thinkin bout goin by looks
or keep both, see if they'll stay on the hook
they like the perfect picture but neither needs me
just thinkin of this shit...shows that pimpin aint easy
met one girl a year ago, the other only a week
time is of the essence, but both of 'em love to freak
so i figure i feed their urge with out leavin 'em clowned
i know girls got feelings, but theres enough for me to go around
both of 'em love talkin, both love takin up my time
when i all love is pussy, and writin these here rhymes
...not to mention that round ball sport
these bitches be full court pressin, im goin at half court
im on tv with only ten points... im thinkin what the fuck
i should be back to twenty, even with my bad luck(knee injury)
im thinkin are these bitches just a waste of time
im might have to pass up a dime, so i can pass up a dime
what you think? what would you do? what would you pick?
....cuz all im left with, is question about this here pimp shit

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nice drop, good rhymes. a few nice multi's in it.rhymes fall of towards the end, structure is ok. but could do with some evening of bars. topic is a bit played.
keep dropping.

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i see what you mean as fasr as strectching the bars this is my first ill be back for more

yea i see what they mean, u could use a lil more words in each line vocab not a problem, but u got talent, dont stop homie 7/10

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yea like they said u could use a few more words in some lines, other than dat ur vocab was hott, good wordplay overall, structure threw me off a bit, but its all good....keep it up....6/10

yeah this shit real clear in thought