rules
no d/r
no hates votes
no crew votes
no feedin
3-0(KO)
5 to win


master blaster'll plastered wit bio-hazard/
no wut i mean, u saltine, watch u burn u fuckin craka/
dont let the n-word be heard comin out yo mouth again/(check out his thread in members pics)
run up in yo house, guns out, and im blastin them/
cant believe i wus deceved by yo whack raps and thought u wus black/
checked yo pick and my mind switched, bitch u should be slaped/
ur pigment impared, wit straight hair, but clame yo moms a soul sista/
jus cus i hit dat dont change the fact that u aint black, damn i miss her/
this aint beef, ull be deceased if ur seen droppin the n-bomb/
thatd be like me given the other white meat(pork)to a black muslim/

hurry up and drop

My name don't start with a P
But I still got lots of styles for miles
Kick you in the stomach
Make you spit up 3 meals and gut bile
Stomach acid
To broke for a funeral
So I slit your wrist in a casket
To broke for a casket
So I set your body on fire
In a tin is where I put the ashes
Only thing left of dime_hole
Was peach pubic hairs and his pretty long eye lashes
Your lyrics aint even really killin' me
Make you drink a bowl of radioactivey
So do me a favor
Go home and piss cancer
Cause you aint even really ready for Master Mans light saber
We played dress up
He was the screaming dumb blonde
While I was the raper

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can i get a vote

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if not for me then do it for her

uppin, im gonna be away in VA for a while so i wont be able to check this for a while

hey i vote 4 the 2nd guy but hey i will battle either of you or both but whatever post in bitchslapped .

master blaster'll plastered wit bio-hazard/
no wut i mean, u saltine, watch u burn u fuckin craka/
Kind of a Weak Start Out..
dont let the n-word be heard comin out yo mouth again/(check out his thread in members pics)
run up in yo house, guns out, and im blastin them/
Big Filler
cant believe i wus deceved by yo whack raps and thought u wus black/
checked yo pick and my mind switched, bitch u should be slaped/
eh This Iight, Not that HArd of a Punch Tho
ur pigment impared, wit straight hair, but clame yo moms a soul sista/
jus cus i hit dat dont change the fact that u aint black, damn i miss her/
Weak
this aint beef, ull be deceased if ur seen droppin the n-bomb/
thatd be like me given the other white meat(pork)to a black muslim/
Weak.. But if Reworded could be ill

Over all this verse would be like a 5.8.. You need work on alot of your basic.. Wordplay,personal punchs,ect...



Masterblaster

My name don't start with a P
But I still got lots of styles for miles
Kick you in the stomach
Make you spit up 3 meals and gut bile
Stomach acid
To broke for a funeral
So I slit your wrist in a casket
To broke for a casket
So I set your body on fire
In a tin is where I put the ashes
Only thing left of dime_hole
Was peach pubic hairs and his pretty long eye lashes
Your lyrics aint even really killin' me
Make you drink a bowl of radioactivey
So do me a favor
Go home and piss cancer
Cause you aint even really ready for Master Mans light saber
We played dress up
He was the screaming dumb blonde
While I was the raper
Eh.. The style of it was iight.. Over all like a 6 for a verse.. RHyme scheme was kinda new type ish.. But it was iight, your punchs werent comen the harderst, but it was on target.. Metaphors in there were ok, but you should try uppin on more...



Vote= Master Blaster

one

3-0(KO)

1 more



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YO MASTER UR SHYT WAS SERIOUS NI66A AIN'T GOT NUTTIN ON U KEEP SPITTIN DA REAL SHYT. UNO

3-0 KO



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damn dat girl fine.........

yo fuck that shit, i aint neva complained over a lose but this one line bullshit aint cuttin it
"hey i vote 4 the 2nd guy but hey i will battle either of you or both but whatever post in bitchslapped ."
that vote dont count.
"YO MASTER UR SHYT WAS SERIOUS NI66A AIN'T GOT NUTTIN ON U KEEP SPITTIN DA REAL SHYT. UNO"
neither does that shit.
FUCK THE BULLSHIT, either the votein contiues at 1-0(blaster) or this shit is goin to the mods, yall no u would be mad as fuck if u got a lose of some shit votes like that
holla back

i'm not sure who i'ma give this to... ryano definatly had teh better verse, but he focased to much on the pic she added, but i really didn't like MB's verse, it was right wack, ryano had better punches, definatly had better flow, and i actually enjoyed reading teh verse...
VOTE=ryano

whatever kid

1-1

lets get some votes

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Hey Sticky I'm a guy

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uppin, lets get the votes comin

umm... this battle was aiight, i would of thought flow would be nice but i saw little from either...

my vote goes to...

master blaster with a little bit more flow...
that's all i'm about... is flow