Sometimes i feel i'm the greatest i'm ahead of my time
and instead of just rhyme i can fly ahead of my lines
fore' imbedded by fine graphite and lead at a time
they'll be led out of time through my mind and sped up to find
they're ahead of the mind that made them
but ahead in my time they haven't been made yet
because i've sped up my mind
then i led all the lines forward and ahead of my time
i'm ahead of my time though so i'm ahead of my lines
so they're propelled ahead of me and we constantly pick up speed
faster and faster and faster don't stop or slow down or crash or
flo off or often flo faster it often causes disaster
cause and effect is relapse or relapse of a time collapse
so perhaps it's my mind perhaps,
but if that's so
all the lines are timed in my mind so where do the timelines go
and since my mind is so explosive where do the timelines blow
and if my mind don't ever stop then where do the timelines go
since every road leads to a thick brick wall and a slick slick fall
then essentially a paradox is an oxymoron
but indispensible to my poetical thought process
so i'm fighting a losing battle but i've not lost yet

I ain't know what was going on when i was new so i'm bringing this old one to get feed back

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uppin for feedback so yall tell me what you think

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ok, that was a tongue twister lol .. i got exceptional rap skillz and that threw me for a loop but it was naStYY and i aint jokin .. use of vocab gets an A+ lol .. PeaCe

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alright yo, that was hot but, good multis good wordplay but if i see you on the street i'm a whoop yo ass dog!!!!!!! man you owe me 5$ and i expect payment or legs will be broken....

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i like it...the vocab was nice... and the whole fuckin song was a paradox....nicely written

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yea it's ya boy the black mage uppin for more of this motha fuckin feed back so get at me
AND CHECK YA BOY ON THERE, I'M DOING MY THING AGAIN (THERE= THE FRONTLINES)

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Send this back up to the top yall i need some feed back get at me

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yo up this for some feed yall that'd help................

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Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak

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yo nice drop fam...liked the lyrics alot, got some vocab goin for you too in ther. keep them coming, you can only get better...

RTF in sig

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yeah it was very nice u got talent & alot of potential hold it 4 da crew