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Old 01-28-05, 02:29 PM   #1
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The Real Badman!new Shit!!

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I LEFT FEED ON WARZONES BY LETHAL GK AND EXCUSE ME MISS BY NOSTRADAMOUS
YEA SOME HERBS USED THIS BEAT BEFORE ON RV I JACKED IT AND USED IT HOW IT SHOULDVE BEEN USED BUT YOU CANT EXPECT SKATERS AND HERBS TO SPIT HARD ON A GANSTA TRACK SO I HAD TO SNATCH IT AND DO IT
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Old 01-28-05, 03:39 PM   #2
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Okay okay...listening to it again now...

Beat is hot of course but that doesn't guarantee a dope track...But you managed to make it your own, props for that! Loved your voice, had this edgy vibe over it, very enjoyable to listen to...As for the lyrics and your delivery, I got this agressive feeling with it, you spit it extremly raw, had fighting mood over it in my opinion. You were good on the beat, was feeling the flow and everything...

Definately liked this track, good job!

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Old 01-28-05, 03:51 PM   #3
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Good beat, had some good lines like
"I got hammers, and I don't mean carpenter's tools"

Flow was good in 1st verse, your style is somewhat reminiscent of Cassidy's.
2nd verse, delivery and flow were lacking a little, but it wasn't that bad...
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Old 01-28-05, 04:23 PM   #4
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dis was tight man....feelin ur flow
..u came away from ur usual laid back type flow..and jumped on dis heavy beat.., showing versatility..
..........u had some dope lines...overall -8.5/10...i can c dis being stickied

(what happened to u teaching me at audio man?, lol)
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Old 01-28-05, 04:47 PM   #5
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when i first started hearin' your shit, wasn't expectin' you to be as good as you are. Shit was dope, wit punchlines mixed in with the ghetto shit. Shit was nice, mne and my students was bumpin' to it.

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Old 01-28-05, 05:46 PM   #6
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beat is hard..........


flow was on point fo sho............


gutter........


feeling it no doubt..... 8.5/10


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Old 01-28-05, 06:51 PM   #7
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listened... o.k, you bit the whole concept of this song, and when you were sayin "Ima" before bad man- you were strugglin to fit it in... aside from that goodjob, but ThirdSelf version is better
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Old 01-28-05, 11:26 PM   #8
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^nope Thats Why My Track Has More Views And Replies While All Thirdselfs Replies Are From Thirdself And Tito Lmfao So C.a.l.i>thirdself


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