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Old 01-30-05, 06:15 PM   #1
Logic The Goonie
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From: So. Killa Kali
Unhappy *Finds 2 Year Old Rhyme Book*

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Yes, i'm serious.

Yall should drop some of your early shit too so I don't feel like a total herb.

hotta than a oven/
got flows niggas covet/
i know you love it/
my trigger needs affection and soon im gunna hug it/
right now i gotta bitch on my dick and soon she gunna suck it/

More...

walkin down the street with a dollar in my pocket/
homies talkin the talk but he cannot walk it/
say hes from the ghetto just off of Del Rosa/
hes thinkin hes tight but he is just a posa/
told him i could get braces with gold and platinum faces/
cuz i know he bankrupt in about 8 places/
he said he'd kick my butt all up and down the street/
started thinkin crazy, like i would kiss his feet/

More...

How many times i gotta tell ya homie/
without me your girl would be so lonely/
tuesday nights if ya wanted to know/
bet yo ass even taught her how to gimme a blow/
is that your belly button or is that your dick/
yours is probably fourth as long as mine is thick/
everyone knows your an idiot/
dont get scared, but i think you're havin youre period!/

More...

tired of all these fake clowns talkin bout murder/
cuz the closest they came to my meat was a veggie burger/
when my beat stop beatin, you know whats gunna happen/
my dominance will stop and yall bitches will start scrappin/
go to your bitches house and pop her cherry wit a napkin/
fuck her so hard all over the bed she'll be crappin/
forget a condom, fuck her with no cling shit wrapping/
beat you down so much with this shit they call rappin/
using words to give a picture of this virtual bitch slapping/
look at this shit even your homies have started clapping/
gettin down to the flow on their desks they are all tapping/
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BTW this was all written in paragraph structure.

Everyone else drop some of your early shit so I don't get laughed at as hard.
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Old 01-30-05, 06:38 PM   #2
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uhhh... i remember the rhymes but no rhyme book... this is my old rhymes when i first started

yo yo ur wack as hell
u know ur awake when u hear a bell...


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i dunno sumthin like that LMAO
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Old 01-30-05, 07:25 PM   #3
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How many times i gotta tell ya homie/
without me your girl would be so lonely/
tuesday nights if ya wanted to know/
bet yo ass even taught her how to gimme a blow/
is that your belly button or is that your dick/
yours is probably fourth as long as mine is thick/


That shit pretty hot lol.. pretty funny.. but tha's about it..
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Old 01-30-05, 07:33 PM   #4
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That shit pretty hot lol.. pretty funny.. but tha's about it..

lmao............
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Old 01-30-05, 07:30 PM   #5
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OMG that's herb.
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Old 01-30-05, 07:34 PM   #6
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when i start flowing your awearness starts growing its adimit that im showing
why people are stowing away on a boat
hoping they wont get found before it sets a float
to make it to a safer place sitting with no food its were theyll stay for days
there lifes a maze awearness i raise
to be thankfull and praise wat ever you got
wether its some little or alot just amagine wat u could do
if you boild it up in a pot and make use of it instead of abusing it
theres neva gonna be a genie coming out of a bottle to free me
its time to stop going through life at full throttle belive me

lmmfaooooo

theres more but i nearly died typing this.
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Old 01-30-05, 07:36 PM   #7
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hahahhahaha i remember my first freestyle, it was somethin like this...

2 plus 2 equals 4 you big whore...
Like this rap flow that I know,
See this guy sittin next to me is Michael Poe,
Rap name Mop, M-O-P...
thats the way this gonna be..
Can't you see?

haha i thought it was sick at the time... cuz mike poe was sittin next to me
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Old 01-30-05, 07:39 PM   #8
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Umm... u guys... maybe the "LOL" and "pretty funny" didn't give it away... but i was kidding..

I just thought that was the funniest part..
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Old 01-30-05, 07:49 PM   #9
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hahahaha soc was a herrrbbb

My first free was like... yo yo.... yo... yo... straight off the top... yo... umm... ahh shit i fell off...... damn... damn..... yo.............
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Old 01-30-05, 08:04 PM   #10
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I don't have a rhyme book
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Old 01-30-05, 09:11 PM   #11
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Early 2002, one of the first songs I wrote...well, tried to write.

Verse #3:

From dusk till dawn, soon as I start I'm gone
But I gotta make sure I breathe easy like Shawn*
I freestyle raps so much it's crazy
Sorry the album was delayed, I was just lazy
But now it's here, and will be here
I will remain, at least a decade in this game
And everybody knows my name
I'm glad the bullshit stopped 'cuz I'm tired of hate
Being admired is great, but the lack of fame is kinda hurting
Rap's Bobby Fischer, but I'm not found and no one's searching
I'm always flirting, with disaster
Till I'm a ghost like casper, the freestyle master
Can go faster, on ice I might skate well
And when trapped in battle, I might fight well
And everybody says "Yo, you write hate well"
That's how I got rap's championship lightweight belt!

*Reference to song "Breathe Easy" by Jay-Z (Shawn Carter)
Verse was not originally written with that ^explanation.
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Old 01-30-05, 09:33 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by 9th Degree
Early 2002, one of the first songs I wrote...well, tried to write.

Verse #3:

From dusk till dawn, soon as I start I'm gone
But I gotta make sure I breathe easy like Shawn*
I freestyle raps so much it's crazy
Sorry the album was delayed, I was just lazy
But now it's here, and will be here
I will remain, at least a decade in this game
And everybody knows my name
I'm glad the bullshit stopped 'cuz I'm tired of hate
Being admired is great, but the lack of fame is kinda hurting
Rap's Bobby Fischer, but I'm not found and no one's searching
I'm always flirting, with disaster
Till I'm a ghost like casper, the freestyle master
Can go faster, on ice I might skate well
And when trapped in battle, I might fight well
And everybody says "Yo, you write hate well"
That's how I got rap's championship lightweight belt!

*Reference to song "Breathe Easy" by Jay-Z (Shawn Carter)
Verse was not originally written with that ^explanation.

you need to do more topicals......but it was still wack...lol
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 01-30-05, 09:15 PM   #13
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Thank you Dyce for your ever important post. [/sarcasm]

And boooo@ 9th for not being as herbish as me when he started
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Old 01-30-05, 09:17 PM   #14
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If you have somethin to say Soc say it
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Old 01-30-05, 09:29 PM   #15
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Somebody give feed on my verse! Lol...
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