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Old 02-02-05, 01:48 AM   #1
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my opinion

cali, lyrics good, like alot, but its mainly random rhymes, flow is the biggest prolem you have cuz you dont have none sorry all truth

pair of dice, has the illest flow here, gots to say that, and lyrics are dope, can see you making it

9th degree, haha your vioce is weird, i guees its a white thing,{im white too}
had some good lyrics, and flow is good, 50/50 chance making it

nos/ hahah you vioce should get an award, i lauhed hearing that shit, but its all good, i wouldnt buy your cd cuz i wana hear my rapper but im 99 percent sure you could make it big in aussie
trama was on a track but i couldnt tell the difference between you too

will a pear/ another vioce problem but flow is ehh have dope lyrics, stay with singing

omb/hahah his vioce was deep but wierd lol, flow is decent, i didn hea those famous multies ive heard about

.konflict/ flow is cool as hell, gots some multis man, you got a deal so i caint say much,

more to come..............
all this is no hate, use it to help yourself, you need critism cuz most people are to big on them selves
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Old 02-02-05, 01:54 AM   #2
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lol fuck a flow
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Old 02-02-05, 01:58 AM   #3
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seems like you rap like that man, no hate i use to rap like that, stop on a snare or something, or make all your bars equal, flow sells no one cares if you got lyrics if they dont flow right
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Old 02-02-05, 02:01 AM   #4
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naw fuck that mad rappers dont have no flow cassidy to name one most his shit is off beat 50 new shit is off beat candy shop mad people do that thats just my style i have a flow just not a sing song style thats not me i got a laided back ny flow i remember when jay z came out everyone said that shit he had no flow so fuck it
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Old 02-02-05, 02:06 AM   #5
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no there is a flow off beat and a flow to a beat and no flow at all, guees where you reside
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Old 02-02-05, 03:23 AM   #6
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no there is a flow off beat and a flow to a beat and no flow at all, guees where you reside



haha... somebody sig this.
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Old 02-02-05, 03:29 AM   #7
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who the fuck is Poetry? spit audio poetry?
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Old 02-02-05, 03:33 AM   #8
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Nah he doesnt do audio. And I dont really trust his judgement. A bit too commercial to have an open mind.
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Old 02-02-05, 03:37 AM   #9
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oh word. thats what i thought. lets jack him
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Old 02-02-05, 03:42 AM   #10
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so if you wanna come sweatin, stressin contestin
you'll catch a sharp sword to the midsection

I thought that line up just then. When I was thinking of lines that are mine for sure.
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Old 02-02-05, 03:58 AM   #11
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haha.

word thats gravediggaz you like em? they are dopeness.
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Old 02-02-05, 03:59 AM   #12
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Never heard em... I saw it on your sig and attempted to piss you off -_-
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Old 02-02-05, 04:09 AM   #13
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feeble attempt bro.

but damn omb you needa hear gravediggaz! u dont know what ur missing out on.
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Old 02-02-05, 01:55 PM   #14
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feeble attempt bro.

but damn omb you needa hear gravediggaz! u dont know what ur missing out on.



word, pick the cicle and the shovel style... gravediggaz = pure nastiness.
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Old 02-02-05, 06:31 AM   #15
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^Trauma I know your offline but you best get mitch to pick me up you fucker..

I will break your knee caps..
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