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im gettin my verse up early

you're only unique with bruised-knees with dudes-pleased-/ your style is like fourteen days its just to-weak (two-week)-/
your best bet is to-be, a no show like Fat Joe in a nude beach-/
I bring punches that seduce-cheeks and too-leave loose-teeth to dispute-beef-/
have u eat my knuckles followed by chewed-streets with very few-grieves-/
when I make tombs-meet your permanent viewed-sleeps-/
votes?? I got five on it like LOONIES-/
hopes?? you got none like white chicks with booties-/
you wouldn't be hype if white lines is what you-breathe (cocaine)-/
you just one big mistake even your name needs a proof-read-/
while my attitude's-steam has crude-BEATS to have you PRODUCE-screams-/
along with bruisings (purple) to make you look as part of the Laker's UNY's (uniform)-/
while I bring rhyme BARRs more sick then ROSEANNE in a two-piece-/
this match to-me is a smooth-game in less then a few-weeks-/
watch me trade places to void Black Flame, with R.B's true-peeps asking who's-he??-/
in this league I'm breaking more records then the Spiderman movie-/

yeah yeah yeah, checking in. i'll post tommorw or something. hey rep, at least i know this kid wont no-show

What makes you think you can put my homeboys name in your mouth?

Time to start this verse quick and end your gay ass life;
With a 'tighter opener' then me fucking your virgin wife;

-Who Slam Harder? Realize Or Vince Carter?-

Bigger than life, you can touch clouds with just a feather;
Kick in your knees then let ya ass be 'under-the-weather';
Ya heads severed, Go ahead and jump in the ford ranger;
Even if ya ass is dead, this kid will still be in 'Grave'-danger;
i'll be a style changer and still beat ya with a bad amount;
Soulja looks up to me... Cus he's down for the count;
no talent,You know no one likes ya, but you and ya girl fuck;
ya kid hates you, cuz even the birth date stood yall up;
so wha sup? i'll be quick to cut ya head and let ya rot;
if punches were dicks, this kid would get stuck alot;
above the dot, makin a fool of ya like your newbie crews;
i'll waist ya clock, and not even time wants to share wit you;
horrible dude, breakin more records than spidey, kid thats bull;
if ya head was records, i'd fuckin be breakin ya skull;

-REALIZE!!!!!!-

you wanted to eat knowledge so i made ya eat a school book;
like children watchin finished horror movies, even my ending got you shook;

BREAKDOWN::


SOULJA:


you're only unique with bruised-knees with dudes-pleased-/ your style is like fourteen days its just to-weak (two-week)-/
your best bet is to-be, a no show like Fat Joe in a nude beach-/

DECENT OPENER,NOTHING TO HARD HITTING,SETUP WAS NICE,BUT IT DIDNT GO WELL WITH THE NUDE BEACH PUNCH,MAYBE IF REWORDED WOULD OF BEEN TIGHT


I bring punches that seduce-cheeks and too-leave loose-teeth to dispute-beef-/
have u eat my knuckles followed by chewed-streets with very few-grieves-/

OK SHIT HERE,A LITTLE STRETCHED WITH THEM MULTIS,WANST REALLY FEELING THE SETUP PUNCH COMBO HERE

votes?? I got five on it like LOONIES-/
hopes?? you got none like white chicks with booties-/

PRETTY BASIC AND SIMPLE SHIT,NOT FEELING THIS BLAH AT THIS


you wouldn't be hype if white lines is what you-breathe (cocaine)-/
you just one big mistake even your name needs a proof-read-/

OK,I FELT WHERE YOU WERE GOING HERE,THE SETUP WAS OK,COULD OF BEEN BETTER,THE PUNCH ON HIS NAME WAS OK,NOT EFFECTIVE AT ALL,MAYBE IF YOU REWORDED IT BETTER WOULD OF BEEN COOL


while my attitude's-steam has crude-BEATS to have you PRODUCE-screams-/
along with bruisings (purple) to make you look as part of the Laker's UNY's (uniform)-/

I THOUGHT THIS WAS PRETTY DECENT,I THOUGHT YOU SHOULD OF THOUGHT OF SOMETHING ELSE INSTEAD OF THE UNYS ABBRIVATION,I COULD THINK OF SOMETHING THAT WOULD OF FIT GOOD THERE,BUT COOL


while I bring rhyme BARRs more sick then ROSEANNE in a two-piece-/
this match to-me is a smooth-game in less then a few-weeks-/

NOT FEELING THIS RIGHT HERE,BOO AT THIS


watch me trade places to void Black Flame, with R.B's true-peeps asking who's-he??-/
in this league I'm breaking more records then the Spiderman movie-/

OK ENDING HERE,NOT REALLY FEELING THE SETUP PUNCH COMBO HERE,DIDNT REALLY GO WELL ,SPIDERMAN MOVIE ENDING I KNOW WHERE YOU GOING WITH THIS,WASNT REALLY FITTING WITH YOUR SETUP



REALIZE:

Time to start this verse quick and end your gay ass life;
With a 'tighter opener' then me fucking your virgin wife;

DECENT OPENER,KINDA FUNNY,BASIC SHIT



Bigger than life, you can touch clouds with just a feather;
Kick in your knees then let ya ass be 'under-the-weather';

NOT BAD,NOT HARD HITTING,BUT COO SHIT HERE,NOT EFFECTIVE THOUGH


Ya heads severed, Go ahead and jump in the ford ranger;
Even if ya ass is dead, this kid will still be in 'Grave'-danger;

OK,NOT TOO HARD



i'll be a style changer and still beat ya with a bad amount;
Soulja looks up to me... Cus he's down for the count;

COOL SHIT,KIND OF A PLAYED CONCEPT BUTSTILL COOL,AGAIN NOT TOO HARD


no talent,You know no one likes ya, but you and ya girl fuck;
ya kid hates you, cuz even the birth date stood yall up;

BEST LINE IN YOUR VERSE,I WAS FEELING IT,HARD SHIT HERE,FUNNY ALSO


so wha sup? i'll be quick to cut ya head and let ya rot;
if punches were dicks, this kid would get stuck alot;

AGAIN SORTA FUNNY,BASIC THOUGH,NOT HARD ENOUGH



above the dot, makin a fool of ya like your newbie crews;
i'll waist ya clock, and not even time wants to share wit you;

COOL,SHIT NICE


horrible dude, breakin more records than spidey, kid thats bull;
if ya head was records, i'd fuckin be breakin ya skull;

NOT TOO GOOD,BUT OK,NOT EFFECTIVE,BUT THE THING I DIDNT LIKE WAS YOU PLAYED HIS VERSE



you wanted to eat knowledge so i made ya eat a school book;
like children watchin finished horror movies, even my ending got you shook;

ENDING WAS OK,NOTHING PARTICULARLY HARD,BUT COOL


BOTH HAD A GOOD VERSE,I FELT BOTH CAME WITH EQUAL PUNCHES,I PUT THEM TOGETHER,AND I FELT THAT REALIZE CAME HARDER IN PUNCHES AND HE WON THIS BATTLE


VOTE REALIZE NOT BY MUCH THOUGH

soulja had some ok punches, for example " you're only unique with bruised-knees with dudes-pleased-/ your style is like fourteen days its just to-weak (two-week)-/
that was an ok opener and another, "I bring punches that seduce-cheeks and too-leave loose-teeth to dispute-beef-/
have u eat my knuckles followed by chewed-streets with very few-grieves-/

another decent punch, realize really didnt have any hard hitting puches, it was just non effective, flow was ok wprdplay goes to Soulja he won this one

VOTE=Soulja

VOTE=Soulja

Hmmmmmmmmmm.....

UPPIN

i kno watcha thinkin

its hard being a newbie

Both verses were ok, they both had their good points

Soulja had multis going, and very few punches

And Realize had punches, but none of them really made you go... Ooooh....

However in my opinion a battle is to prove who can get on the other the hardest (In my OPINION)

So I'm going to give this vote to Realize for his punches

Vote: Realize

2-1 Realize.........

and soulja what are you talkin bout? nice verse also.

this battle wasnt the best but it was iight

soulja went multi crazy wit lil or no punches
reallize tried to punch but they were ineffective.

but this is a battle and multies dont win it.

so
vote Realize

Ummmmm 3-1 realize,

another thing how in the hell you gonna say my punches were in effective. jebus, are you all blind?

This was a close battle. After readin this a few times, I came to the conclusion that realize skimmed the win because his punches were a lil bit more effective. Good battle.