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No Crew/Hate Votes
No Recycling/Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 02-05-05 at 07:58 PM

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.:SnoOk:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 02:00 PM.

i use to shoot for the thrill//
now i shoot to kill//
muther fucker wanna die//
ill rip out your eye//
ill even let my bro try//
ill put u in a body bag//
hang you to sag//
chop off ur leg//
fuk tha caskit//
ill put you in a basket//
dig a 6 feet hole//
cuz im about to go out of control//
ill make you scream my name//
in vain, with ill that pain//
barry you in rain//

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Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 09:29 PM.

I made an open call in Bitchslapped and he responded..

But yo, im not gonna explain my punches cause its gay and wack..
So, if for some gay reason you dont understand, pm me.. dont vote unless you understand what im saying..

My personals are on his name though.. so just read it and try to understand..

But whatever.. Lemme key something up right quick..

Just face it, your garbage... and now youll be leavin messed
And,
The site may not have a lisp, but we still dont wanna read S
Ya in wackness.. Steppin to me?.. Shit, ill just jump ur name
Put together a win?..
..You have to use dots just to build up your name
Your lame kid.. With that shit, it already makes u seem fake
Then you,
Had to buy from the army just to get a fuckin think tank
Take your ugly ass face outta here, almost look like a whore
But Clearisil aint gonna change the fact ur skills are still pore
Leavin ya torn.. owned, ripped, whatever, u still leavin bent
And,
I dont even need RV to totally fuckin handle Sn

And, You're done.

Voted For: Mimesis

ur verse was not even good and u still merked on snook lol. u had some ok punches , like the one about clearisil that was hot. but other than that it was def a quick keystyle. but i understand where u were comin from, cuz other dude is wack right now. but thats all u needed to come away wit a win, why waiste a bunch of hot bars snook or w/e his name is.
snook needs to work on structure,punches. wordplay...everything
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Voted For: Mimesis

dam mimesis stop it homie, all u battlin is fuckin newbies...even if he accpeted the battle you coulda said sum1 wit more experience dam homie

punches, personals, wordplay, metaphors, creativity goes to ya, however

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What the fuck?

Then i would have looked gay..

"Open battle, anybody respond"

'Im down!'

"Nah, its alright.."

Thats just fuckin stupid..

All he had to do was not respond.. I didnt force, ask, or do anything to influence him to battle me..

He brought it upon himself.

Voted For: Mimesis

dose this need explaining?

punchs-M
pers-M
flow-S
stuckture-none
vocab-M

easy win here 4 M he had punches and all that shit he tok this 1 sided all the way S man weak as fuck like 3 words a lines ur wack get bad elevation came rly weak M gets this 1 sided came hard with punches and persnals and vocab

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Voted For: Mimesis

i dont even kno what this was...why fake a battle. this is just a easy win for memisis...better structure, and better punches gave him tha win. u came hard with that, and i was feelin ur whole verse, and mettas and personals in this one...
.:SnoOk:. -just made it too easy for him. u had some nursery rhymes. yo structure was wayy off, and ur lines werent even play'd, they were beyond play'd...elevate big time. yo verse was wackk...
overall-memsis took this one sided battle...

plz RTF on battle link in sig, pick one...n make it xplained plz, cause i took tha time out to vote on this..

~1~

Voted For: Mimesis

Just face it, your garbage... and now youll be leavin messed
And,
The site may not have a lisp, but we still dont wanna read S
decent punch
Ya in wackness.. Steppin to me?.. Shit, ill just jump ur name
Put together a win?..
..You have to use dots just to build up your name
blah weak punch here
Your lame kid.. With that shit, it already makes u seem fake
Then you,
Had to buy from the army just to get a fuckin think tank
…not feeling this punchline here
Take your ugly ass face outta here, almost look like a whore
But Clearisil aint gonna change the fact ur skills are still pore
decent punch, kinda landed
Leavin ya torn.. owned, ripped, whatever, u still leavin bent
And,
I dont even need RV to totally fuckin handle Sn
no, weak punch here…

i use to shoot for the thrill//
now i shoot to kill//
no…
muther fucker wanna die//
ill rip out your eye//
ill even let my bro try//
no…
ill put u in a body bag//
hang you to sag//
chop off ur leg//
decent multi’s, but weak punch
fuk tha caskit//
ill put you in a basket//
okay…no…
dig a 6 feet hole//
cuz im about to go out of control//
no…
ill make you scream my name//
in vain, with ill that pain//
barry you in rain//
decent multi’s, punches wasn’t there

Overall Mimesis took this one, came harder in punches
And the structure was in place

(stop facing newbs…practically all u do…)

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