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Old 07-22-02, 12:54 AM   #1
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I doubt

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You know the sun breaks through after the rain,
a rainbow appears slowly takes away your pain,
the days go on and that heartbreak fades/
That beautiful smile re-appears that was taken by a frown,
no need fo` tears are to be feelin down,
you still alone but you dont need a nigga by your side,
starting to take care of yourself and ur life havin pride/
All this time trippin coz you didnt have a man,
now realising they just bring you down now you dont give a damn/
Life is full of loves and searching no need to concentrate on one,i aint saying to act like a hoe just dont settle or fall to young/
Fo` i spit the truth as i havin fallin and been caught since the young age on fourteen,
in the same situation many times now learnt my lesson and
starting to see at the age of seventeen/
I am not blind no more i look twice before i cross the road,
i get all these vibes from guys like a silent code/ -
Gods now warning me helping me out
some might say im pickie but i just doubt ...

That a guy realises the shit we go through,
(i doubt they kno)
Why we skit when they hang wid there crew,
(i doubt )
If he being true ,
(i doubt)
When you cheat u`ll never do it again,
(i doubt)
Yall even think wid your brain ,
(i doubt)
If yall know the tru defenition of a man//
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Old 07-22-02, 01:06 AM   #2
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i've been a rapbattles.com for awhile

and i havn't once even checked out the

poetic scriptures thread till now

and i'm glad i've did

cause ma you got talent to write

keep writin'

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Old 07-22-02, 02:14 AM   #3
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yo dis shyt is real. im feelin dis rii here. keep postin dunny. 1luv
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Old 07-22-02, 03:19 AM   #4
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It aint just one man it's ALL men. All men suck. You have a right to know that.

I'm going to tell you this knowing that if you do what I say, it'll mean I have no chance in bed with you (Not that I had one anyway)... become a lesbian. Trust me, it might seem gross or whatever, but be a lesbian. If I could be a lesbian, I would.

As a man I know that men can be dicks. They don't know how to please or satisfy a woman. But women do! And women are usually not assholes. (Except during that time of the month. But werewolves act the same too every month)

Think of it this way; you can be with a man. But that will mean having a guy that doesn't truly care about you and you'll get screwed in the ass and thrown on the curb when a hotter chick comes along.

Or you can be with a woman. And that'll mean being with someone that knows how to care about another living person. You'll get licked in the pussy and that'll result in an orgasm, which 95% of men don't know how to give a woman. (I'm pretty sure I'm in that 95% too. I can't help it, I don't even lick ice cream.) And women have this thing about being faithful and not cheating or whatever.

The Necromancer Atra Ludio: Over 3 women converted to lesbians already and counting.

(By the way, if you ever do become a lesbian and like, get with a chick, can you send pictures?)
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Old 07-22-02, 04:05 AM   #5
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this was tight, nice rhymes scheme meaning, ish was there, more madd respect and props, stay up fem... peace
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Old 07-22-02, 09:39 AM   #6
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YEA U STILL GOT IT GIRL!!!
THIS WAS TIGHT!
IT AZ GOT SUM QUITE GOOD RHYMES IN DERE 2!
KEEP SPITTIN GIRL!
NUFF LUV!!
$PEACE$

^^^^^UPPIN DIZ Y`ALL! DONT SLEEP!^^^^
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Old 07-22-02, 01:16 PM   #7
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dis reply is to necromancer yo dis ain't da fuccin jerry springer sho to go talk about recruit lesbians. yall be hatin on men sometymes and deres sho enough ni66as out dere that satisfy ladies. so all dat bull shyt u talkin take it someplace else. i hate da stupid shyt yall hatas be slang. go eat some coochie or somethang. 100
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Old 07-22-02, 01:25 PM   #8
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a bit cynical most def...but i feel what you saying...you get some who are just...well...not real men...but half man half dog...(!!!!)....but its all good...theres still quite a few out there who know the 'righteous way'....but i think ya know that (?)...seemed more like a venting piece...just letting all the rage out in a poetic way..


....respect...
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