i rap to change minds, boast, and express political concepts/
not a style magazine when i say im lyrically complex/
some rap to get a large check/
either on the side of their nikes or in a bank wit a large net//
if u rap to get crunk, hyphy, or off the chain/
then EmCee's ya missin link to spark ya brain/
like mental pyrotechnics explodin thoughts in vain/
random unconscious actions leavin artists slain/
as blood staind in fabric a title in rappin is hard to Gain/
some flow to go from rap to riches or say they grab some bitches/
but forget they like the Wright Brothers....they started plain//
some to be on top of the charts/
like hospital secretaries wit a positive start/
some rap and they fall off the mark/
still tryin to hold up their fame like a column and arch//
then u got ticker tape rappers who get the message across/
rappers who'll auction Aretha Franklin to prove respect has a cost/
ones who drip nice cuts call em clumsy wit a saw/
but when freestylin it's more than their wrists that turn into frost//
if ur feelins are locked up i rap to put a key in ya/
open u up not leavin u shot up just come to speak to ya/
and expose what makes no sense like braille in movie theaters//
some rap to get groupies seein them/
then some rap lyrics wit no character and somehow movies feature them//
i don't get some shit and to do u is all i can ask for/
leavin the question of really what do u rap for//

ey yo dat shit was tight man u had a subject da whole
time wich was good cause these otha dudes b switchin topics
here and there,but yea u had good vocab,structa,flow keep up mayne.return da fav. on my new post im bac bitch

over all:10/10

thanx fo da feed its greatly appreciated...no doubt ill leave some feed....uppin dis shit

hey u got a real good point to urs and it flowed perfectly never ran dry, it had nice punchlines, and...will at the beginning u didn't have much multi's but u sure had a bit near the last half..good job i'll give ya a 6.5/10 keep it up and peep my new one out "Complexity" and leave some feed if u can i'd appreciate it

ok no doubt, ill leave somse feed in a bit...thanx....uppin....

im feelin that shit
its pretty tight
u had good vocab
and lyrical content
and u didnt go off topic
great drop
ill give u 8.5/10
return tha favor

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WHAT UP MA...YEAH IT WAS GOOD...THE FLOW WAS GOOD...VOCAB WAS GOOD...STAYED ON TOPIC THE WHOLE THING...THE STRUCTURE WAS GOOD TO...YOU SHOULD ADD TO THAT AND MAKE IT EVEN BETTER...

RETURN THE FAVOR...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...165#post1946165

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HONOR and RESPECT

whats da deal lil C?...dis is another tight drop from u...i was really really feelin dis one gurl...9/10...oh yeah, return tha fava 2...links in sig

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lol damn guys, thanx fo da honest feed back, yea ill add on later....but no doubt will return da favor to u all later......uppin

verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry trrrrrruuuuuuuuuue , yeh u makin a valuable point.......nice ta c sum ppl rappin wid meanin roun ere ..keep it up.......... ~1~

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thanx fo da feed LADY really appreciated.........uppin dis shit