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A.K. Nightfall has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 03:28 AM.

Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 12:19 PM.

I changed my stru because a lot of ppl say its weak so I changed it up

Instead of a 'CHALLENGE', I take it as a 'DEATH WISH', Read your Past Battles, ~My WORST Rips Your BEST SHIT!~
~YOUR DEAD BITCH! ~You Just MESS WITH~ The Wrong 'G', Steppin' To Me!? Your in the 'DANGERFIELD' Just Like 'you'. There Ain't No STOPPING ME! / Come Again, ~I'll be Forced to DROP You CHIEF. ~I'll STOMP This BEEF! ~I'm Known to EAT EMCEES, With CHOMPING TEETH!~ / ~Were You Sure ABOUT TAUNTING ME!?~ HONESTLY, YOU DON'T KNOW!?/ ~I'll SLUMP You HO!~ This FAG Drops The Instant Punch Line's Directed GUNs BLOW~ / This Trick is DONE FO', BLOODIED The FLOOR! Have Another Fucker Face to Face With the LORD! Punch Line Amasses Soldiers in HORDES, Be Like TROJANS With SWORDS, Murdered This WHORE! DISMANTLE His HANDLES~ Then SEPERATE THEM in GORDS!~ I'll EXIT OUT DOORS.~ / ~If This Wack Bitch BEATS ANYONE ELSE! ~My ATTACKS Are Gonna BE FELT! ~YOUR GOING TO HELL! ~Got The Fags Who Vote For You with Thier Heads On A SHELF!~ / Your Last Hand has Been DEALT! The Fuck With Your HEALTH. Get Murked Mother Fucker, Cuz The Last Word Has Been SPELT!


Change up
|I Eternally Criticize your Image, Deface your Face Until your Own Mom Can't Distinguish~|
|Your Finish, It's My Buisness, To Make Sure your The Only Witness to Your Death, So Keep your Lips Stitched.|
|This Bitch Wish He Can Defeat Me, Always Talking About "How He Spit So ill."|
|Bitch!!! 'I Spit ill', 'So ill, That I Kill at Free Will', This Trick is UnSkilled, Had My Fill of Wack Emcee.|
|Don't Tempt Me, ak is a "Filler" Because All His Rhymes are "Running On Empty".|
|This Fool Sent For Me!? You Must've Thought You Caught Me at a Bad Moment.|

|I Don't Condone Tricks, I Read your Past Battles, Your Lyric's Remind of The Weak Shit Spoken in The South.|
|I Fucked Your Mom While She Was Pregnant With You, So ak Was Born With My dick in His Mouth.|

its over its done

yo im new to rapverse...
and its my first battle, im already sending u back to the womb in a bloody hearse...
bitch u accept cuz u thought this was ganna be a breeze...
u thought oh hes new and hes from alaska, ill bring my stats up..but bitch u missjudged me...
your shit looks like its been written by a child....
somone needs to spice u up cuz this hot suace is mild...
kid i aint even tryin...
cuz the sause comes out way to fast and u been spillin...
u might as well get of this site...
cuz u are supposed to represent where u from not make people ashamed of it...
so bitch if u come back come strong...
dont do some pussy kiddy shit,that i could do while im to blazed to even take another hit from da bong...
so damn kid im sorry u just got served by a newbie...
somone pass the hotsauce it needs another serving...

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THE A.K. MC.............

The mind is its own place, and in itself, can make heaven of Hell, and a hell of Heaven.

haha fuck man i htought i was gong first haha we posted at the same time whutever but vote...........

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THE A.K. MC.............

The mind is its own place, and in itself, can make heaven of Hell, and a hell of Heaven.

damnnnnnnnn niggaaaaa
you wasted madddddd lyrics on his wack asss

in laymans terms...MURDA

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im not sure which part of hot sauce's shit i was sposed to read... but dont matter heres just my feeds aint votin nEway.

STYLE:
hotsauce's got the edge with the constant attempt on internal rhymes, but u gota be careful, theres a fineline between being artistic and pure crampedthefucktogether; AK, for a first, this shit alone shows taht u've got deep potentials, keep workin on this shit man

PUNCH:
"instead of a challenge i take is as a deathwish, read ur past battles, my worst rips ur best shit!" OUCH!!! sick line... only... it's AK's first battle here, get ur facts straight
"i fucked ur mom while she was pregnant with u, so AK was born with my dick in his mouth" iLL give u this one, but this was close to being as stretched as AK's blow wit the bong.
my personal favorite? "someone needs to spice u up cuz this hot sauce is mild"... DAYMN!

FLOW:
hotsauce, with some better breaks, u could kiLL the crowd
AK, u lost ur momentum as u built ur verse

TECHNIQUE:
i see some real potential damage here guys, keep it up

S: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall
P: =tiE=
F: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall
T: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall (keep workin at it AK, ur there)
OVERALL: hotsauce's got it, but not by the big landslide i expected
VOTE: Hot Sauce, but im stiLL a post away from being able to make this official

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