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02-09-05, 05:36 AM
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Reborn(riddle)
IP:
could a rose grow in the desert without rain/
could there be a struggle without pain/ bones broken witout strains/ thinkin witout brains// figure that out strange wit no mathematics/ just rap tactics and spoken word that dramatic// lookin at all the schematics seein witout eyes/ a winner witout a prize/ a sinner in most eyes// so my head i hold high cause lookin down theres no ground/ how am i standin in a world alone now// being so proud witout self esteem/ selfishly others seem to have dealt with me/ no veins yet others have bled for me/ life is like tivo everythings set for me// not tryin to be the best but definitely qualify/ feeling immortal theres no way of a homicide/ could u kill a man that obviously can not die// I can not try to resist destiny’s fate for me/ I am destiny’s child…Beyonce didn’t wait for me/ Lockin my money in a box wit a combination hastily/ is the only time life will ever be SAFE for me// could a gun kill a man without bullets/ shot by a person without fingers that’s steadily trigger pullin/ all these lies u say….my attention I fear ur losin/ so I bring out toilet paper if i know im hearin bullshit// Tell me how can I accomplish the right job im after/ If everybody wanna holla at me like Allah backwards/ Then I realize none of this drama matters/ go quicker rewindin urself than goin forward… estimated 4 times faster/ And I’ll spit it like 4 times bastards/ Meditate and space myself like a war time NASA/ And go forward in reverse like 4 times backwards// So I can be stuck in the present past more like casper/ still movin on nigga im gone/ Im ghost listen and hear my laughter/ And if u didn’t get it… read it over, im reborn// |
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02-09-05, 05:38 AM
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02-09-05, 05:56 AM
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**the council**
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IP:
i liked this, it flowed well and i liked the opening lines, i think you put some emotion into this drop too......
Lockin my money in a box wit a combination hastily/ is the only time life will ever be SAFE for me// ^^^my fave lines...keep doing it 8.5/10
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02-09-05, 06:15 AM
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IP:
anoda gud drop
 .................. 8/10.........altho kinda found the 'ALLAH' bit offensiv....................keep droppin......fire...... ~1~ peace |
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02-09-05, 06:21 AM
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IP:
lol awe im sorry its just a piece....but thanx 4 da feed guys really appreciate it......uppin dis shit
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02-09-05, 06:25 AM
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Flyweight
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IP:
sfe , n worriez.....
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