Feeling the effects of being a broken god/
walking on frozen dirt bare footed because I didnt spare the rod/
when it came to my friends I told it how it was/ hard broken thoughts broken promises constricted misconceptions solitary confinement like Im living in the yard/ its a strain living like i do/ true its beneficial but people suck, not get angry, what would you do/ a part of me says forget them, dismiss all my friendships as fallen civilizations/ no hesitation, no pause in my actions, if my friendships were meant to die id rather them from suffication not deprevation/ my soul is empty as a cup of water in the sahara/ my mind resmebles a dessert no vegitation the land is rough bare and a/ mysterious place to strive to be the best/ this is my determination i will surpass all the rest/ make my name great create my own crest/ resemble royalty, but not be uppity in the same instance/ i must keep my mind from crumbling like bread withing this/ Hurricane without peace no eye of the storm for a short lived contintment/ Bloody eys of resentment no this is not me/ i must change, elevate above all the controversy/ i stand before you in the rain at midnite/ my clothes dripping wet with disappiontment in my sights/ we was once bois but now your image is illusioned/ im confused with the waht the thirst for friendship/ but all i got is bad memories i will never forget the/ disappointments but a wise man once said give goat enough rope and it will hang itself/ now im only cordial, turn my back on the friendship virus or whatever is left/ you look at me in questions leave me out in cold conversions/ my soul ask for emancipation , well now it is granted/ if i appear disfigured , I AM, my whole outlook is slanted/

uppin

long yet worht the read was put together well most def ffollowed a nice distinct order and wasnt to jukpy had god flow to it but wasnt feeling the topic ll that well

peace hazy

yea i guess i get to see ur crazy side lol!!! j/p shyt was reall keep postin dunny. uno

thx uippin

was powerful...had to dig a bit....but i found it very intriguing....and related to it in a certain context..

the imagery was very good..and the metaphors and analogies you used were very well executed..

...respect...

I can relate to dis babyboi,
Much props ...

Keep spittin da real

~1~

uppin