yo peep this track!!...called "Questions"....verse 1=Why? verse 2=How? verse 3=What If?...drop ya links also!!


www.soundclick.com/kaveh7
"Questions"




Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1948792
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1948799

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beat is nice.......lyrics are nice......

first verse.. kinda stole that kobe line...and the bin ladden
your emotion is good but you got to get on rythm....

2nd...good lyrics.......you kinda talk about the same shit......just added HOw..
but good.... not really feelingn how you copied jadakiss

3rd....nice lyrics...better lyrics then all of the other versses....i like that DRE and eminem line........good shit...chorus is not that good......but its on beat


good shit just i dont like your voice...its like your reeading from a paper or the screen...

Rtf on my JUSTICE song...

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

ight yeh i feel wat you sayin..oh and on that Kobe line was jus the concept, i mean this wasnt even supposed to be posted up, i jus did it for the hell of it haha...then one of my boys told me to jus post it up eneyway...thanks for the feedback!!

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jea it seems like u copied jada a lil too much on the lyrics, especially in the 1st and 2nd verse, chorus is choppy and quality is bad overall, ur 3rd verse is the best, flow is off on the whole track, i can see when u pause to wait for the beat a lil, but this shii wasnt the worst ive heard.

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

word man i know wat you mean, but the lyrics that you say is from Jada is jus the concepts, not the exact line, but then again like i said, it was jus supposed to be a track from bordom lol..thanks for the feedback!

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uppin for some more feedback

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