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Invektive 5 83.33%
Dopeman 1 16.67%
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Old 02-11-05, 05:04 PM   #1
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Invektive vs Dopeman

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6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

I'ma accept the battle after you, just too make sure you gonna accept n all, aight?



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Old 02-11-05, 05:12 PM   #2
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Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 05:12 PM.
 
Old 02-11-05, 05:22 PM   #3
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Dopeman's mixed up on his location awareness..so realizing is what ima make ya
you confused...how could you be from the Dirty...when your avy's reppin Jamaica?
dope..well we already know that you slow....so im gonna give you two clues next
fuckin hick first off..skip hip hop...second.....stick to country music and two steps
he stays steady spittin it and packin it.......so honestly we all aware he loves shit
dont worry bitch...you the man of it...so i know the dope impares your judgement
Dopeman is truly a herb...the name speaks for itself..."impossible" is his "mission"
cause he couldnt 'beat me with words' if his verse was part of the Judicial system



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Old 02-11-05, 05:24 PM   #4
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Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 05:24 PM.
 
Old 02-11-05, 05:28 PM   #5
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Kid thinks hes ''Established' his bitch crew got him 'Brain Washed'
every ''shot'' he take is like Shaq guardin the hoop...Its ''SQUASHED''
Aimin lyrical Disses with which he ''Misses'' like A guy who cant 'Conseive'
I'd say you have ''People skills'' But i had a better conversation with 'Jeeves'
Cause ya talents similiar to ya love life....Non Existant
All along you been kiddin yourself about your talent like a Meriage...
....But really its Distant !
My texts bring imminent death like a Blood Clot
Where as you Flatline like ya whole verse is typed with DOTS........................... (Ha Haaa)

Aight, sorry if Meriage aint spelt right, but its like When you see things that aint there, like in the desrt or whatever, ya know?

If ya dont understand either of the verses, dont vote, simple
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Old 02-11-05, 07:28 PM   #6
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Uppin for some votes y'all

Honest well explained votes will be returned by us both

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Old 02-12-05, 01:39 AM   #7
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Voted For: Invektive


Inektive
Nice Verse Kid You Killed Him, Vocabulary Was There Found That Neat, DopeMan Didn't Have Much Vocabulary In his Verse, Just Basic Ish, Punches Was There Both Had Punches But Invektive Came Harder With Them And much More Creative, Both Had Meta's Found That Creative Also But Invektive Got This Again, Both need To Add Some Multi's I nyour Verse And You'll Do Well, Nice Work From Both Of You, But I Have To Give This One up To Invektive

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Old 02-12-05, 01:44 AM   #8
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word...thanks for the honest vote....me and dopeman will RTF honestly.....uppin for more vote....this was a good battle dopeman...should be close
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Old 02-12-05, 01:45 AM   #9
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If you Going To Return The Favor Do It On The Battle Me Vs Death
 
Old 02-12-05, 03:25 AM   #10
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^^^favor returned in battle vs. hammer....sorry didnt see the post....uppin
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Old 02-12-05, 03:28 AM   #11
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Checking the polls...........dopeman got merked...
 
Old 02-12-05, 03:32 AM   #12
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Voted For: Invektive

ok you win simple a that

ok

INVENKTIVE..you came dope with the opener..you just need to elevate on your structure right when i saw how your verse was set up i waslike" fuck this kid spitten some streched lines" but atcaully they where pretty decent..i liked your opener and i didnt get bored at all......nice shit....i liked most of your shit ...some of it could have been worded better but other than that it was good....not the best on the site but decent
all in all 8.5/10

dope......aight he murdered you ..i know alot of people play off your name and that shit is played out...but its like he brought it back into style......shit...plain and simple...i shouldnt even have to get into detail...but i will

you nneed to stop battling for a while...you have like hella battles...so take it easy for a month....then start up again..becuase your structure was wack and your verse where either streched or too short......and your metaphores where wack..if you can call those metaphores....personasl didnt even attempt to hit....just take time off and come back....

all in all 6.0/10

vote=INVEKTIVE
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Old 02-12-05, 09:11 AM   #13
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hmmmm
Right then

Uppin for more votes y'all
Leave a link n they will be returned

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Old 02-12-05, 11:58 AM   #14
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Voted For: Invektive

tight....

Dopeman....had some good wordplay and punches in there, for the most part, it was pretty hard to follow, flow wasnt really good, very choppy in some places, and structure, i dont know if there was one, but you had some nice punches/personals, the mirage one was probs your best one, but overall you came pretty weak and that limited the effect the punches/personals had.....fairly weak closer, didnt do it for me, overall, didnt really come as hard as your oppent and verse lacked complexity and thought..

Invektive....solid drop man, okay opener, second line coulda used some work......second bar was probs the weakest, had choppy flow and didnt really hit hard.....liked the 3rd bar, haha laughed at this one, hit hard, good flow to it, and the closer, solid closer, good wordplay on name and shit....overall, good punches/personals, got right to the point, flowed nicely, good vocab and wordplay, and hit harder than dopeman's verse, actually got to insulting him more and what not, good drop by both, by invektive come out on top

vote: Invektive
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Old 02-12-05, 12:05 PM   #15
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Decent feed y'all....
Appreciate the honesty
Except for Capitol which is a hate vote
But i'ma let it slide cause i was feelin ya flow Inep

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