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02-15-05, 10:38 AM
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Acuity - The Jury (fucka ub2ez)
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www.soundclick.com/realskills - top track
quality is gettin betta......flow is a lil off but didnt hav time to do re-takes and re-dubs etc...rip it apart with constructive feed please..  http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172035 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176668
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02-15-05, 12:03 PM
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plz listenm to it hi-fi...cso lo-fi makes it sound even wacker than it is...lol..and this is a subtle way of bumpin aswell.....
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02-15-05, 05:40 PM
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bump...........
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02-15-05, 07:06 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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wow you really wanna get dissed
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02-15-05, 07:07 PM
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^yup go 4 it, il be waiting..........
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02-15-05, 07:23 PM
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Hell yeah
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listening:
Beat:damn i was gonna use this Damn damn damn lol anyway dope beat Flow:not bad,ive seen better from you Lyrics:good good,good diss QUality: like you said its getting way better good diss |
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02-15-05, 10:01 PM
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aight , beat kicks in yeah I like this beat nice choice of beat
the lyrical content is pretty cool, and flow isn't bad, quality ain't bad better then most cats still needs work on the quality keep working on it ... You can work on ur delivery aswell, seemed like ur hole emotion would drop at the end of your bars quite often ....I don't know if it was by purpose but... maibe check it out bro my 2 cents... keep dropping peace |
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02-16-05, 06:19 AM
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thanks 4 contructiv feed y'all...
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02-16-05, 06:23 AM
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aight man....
the beat was easy...and ya lyrics...blah..they coulda beeen betta...ya fow...u got a net flow just like ub2ez..dont worry...i used to have a net flow as well...but just put some multis up in there and make it more complex...ckuz on this beat...if u flipped multis that would make it hot right there...o yea...dont just rhyme the endin word of ya lines...ckuz somthin i heard... Muthafucka....playing at Rucka... what i do is make my last three words of every line rhyme...with internal rhymes as well... so just step up ya flow...bring the lyrics up and ull be aight...
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02-16-05, 02:48 PM
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weerd thanks 4 the advice man.........
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