Yo whats good rv? Aint been on in a lil minute...thought I'd drop the finished version to a love song for my gurl...Hit me up with a lil feed and I will do the same...Enjoy...


Verse 1:

This not a lie, lately you've been on my mind
The truth is, a friend like you is, hard to find
Helped me walk when blind, let me know if I crossed a line
An angel true, that helped me make it through, the hardest times
A star that shined, it's hard but I, want you to feel this
No gimmicks, shit, ya friendship is, one in a million
Believe it it's true, you're a queen, I can see the genius in you
And I wrote this rap, to show you that, I'm thinking of you
This girl's my queen, she means more than the world to me
And a world, without her, just isn't the world for me
Helped me learn to see, and has a body that'll slur ya speech
Told me not to get high, cuz I'd get by, with her with me
I'm in love with you, this love is true, I need this child
Together's a pact, I'd walk to heaven and back, to see you smile
The love of my life, the woman that I want as my wife
I'd leave the Earth to NEVER see you hurt, just wanna be loving you right!

Hook:

I know that I'm blessed, and with every breath I breathe
I'm blessed to have her with me, and to know that she'll never leave
My everything, and I'm blessed to have you by my side
Blessed to have a girl, in my world, that'll ride or die

Verse 2:

You're a dream come true, angels do exist, she's the proof
It's like, dark becomes light, everytime I think of you
She's the truth, what I need in my life, treated me right
And with this queen by my side, there's no end to what we could do
You've got it all, the type of girl, that'll drop your jaws
Or the type, when you walk by, that makes you want to stop and pause
My queen bee, never leave you, never leave me
And shit, she's got a kiss, that makes my knees weak
In love with your smile, you're more than just something with style
I'm in love with you, and I want you to, mother my child
You changed my life, once was wrong, but you made me right
And I can't wait, for the day, when you're made my wife
Your game is tight, never break, forever great
And each kiss, is a step closer to Heaven's gates
A dime and it shows, you worth more than diamonds and gold
My life and my soul, shit I can't even try to control

Hook:

I know that I'm blessed, and with every breath I breathe
I'm blessed to have her with me, and to know that she'll never leave
My everything, and I'm blessed to have you by my side
Blessed to have a girl, in my world, that'll ride or die

Verse 3:

I was blinded from stress, didn't care for love, just for rhyming the best
But I'ma confess, that without you girl, my life is a mess
But life has been blessed, you're the one that I need, in love with a queen
Comforted me, now trying to be the man you want me to be
You're something supreme, holding me tight, you showed me the light
I know that its right, cuz you really mean something to me
You loved me for me, shined brighter than the sun and its beams
Made me feel right, and now I realize, your love is something I need
A wonderful thing, who would ever know we'd make it this far?
All you need, is a set of wings, to represent the angel you are
God gave you it all, and us combined, is something right
Because baby, I love you more than the sun could shine
Always stuck by with such pride, and I gotta let you know
That I couldn't ever imagine trying to let you go
My strength, my soul, I done paid my dues, you saved me boo
And I can't wait, for the day, when we say "I do"

Hook:

I know that I'm blessed, and with every breath I breathe
I'm blessed to have her with me, and to know that she'll never leave
My everything, and I'm blessed to have you by my side
Blessed to have a girl, in my world, that'll ride or die

you know what i am gonna say fam...nice shit...i was feelin that alot...makes u think and you had good emotion...i want to hear this shit recorded up man...get at me

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"I didnt choose this life, this life chose me"

HONOR and RESPECT

that woz fuckin hot, deep thought gone into it i can see, it flowed well aswell, this is gud shit. 8.5/10

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Thanx for the love yall...And Payday I'll holla at you homie when I get it in audio...holla at me man...uppin this shit...1

Yo...uppin this shit for a little feed...damn...

i like da concept & overall quality of da song is good i would give it a 9.0/10
make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic

Thanx for the feed man...As I said, I will return all feed, so please leave me some!! Thanx...1

Damn come on yall!! Please leave a lil feed on this shit!! Fuck!! I will return the fuckin favor!! Damn...Uppin this shit!! 1

hott drop fam...keep them coming...didnt like a couple parts though but its still coo..
Concept was good, imagery was ok...and lyrics were decent..

RTF fam...inspiration...first drop in a quick minute..

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ey yo magik dis shit is hott man nice wordplay structa flow erthing
was nice i give u 10/10.....and yo boy anthony told me u was sellin beats
so imma start buyin em from u.....ive heard a few of they hott....and them imma start recordin at antonys house....let me no if u down wit a collab...i holla

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Thanx for the feed yall...And I'm always down for a collab...just hit me up with a topic and what you need, and I will get it done...Thanx for the feed...Uppin this shit...1

.................ayo lemme know if you wanna collab sometime fam..pz

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Hit me up with a topic and lets get the shit started homie...uppin this for feed...1

Nice piece........

^^WTF?? Come on man you can do better than that...Damn...Lookin for some more real feed on this shit...1