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Old 02-18-05, 07:37 PM   #1
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werd. i just wuz gittin tired of not havin no audio shit, so i recorded this last night wif my lil bruthaz ps2 hedset shit. its tha only song i got on there rite now "KOOL VERSE" werd

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=174863&page=2

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177466

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Old 02-18-05, 07:43 PM   #2
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nice flow........h8 the beat....some nice lyrics..a bit of gat bussin talk...try 4 more complex rhymescheme...nice lyrical content..not bad man lookin forward 2 hearin sum of yo proper shit str8 up...-7.5/10 leave feed on ma track wid nitro in songs...Peace
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Old 02-18-05, 07:53 PM   #3
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NWA beat nigga, watchu no bout dat

dis was short but sweet

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Old 02-18-05, 07:55 PM   #4
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NWA beat nigga, watchu no bout dat

dis was short but sweet

simple said


NWA = my gods

thanx fo tha feedback both yall, werd
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Old 02-18-05, 08:21 PM   #5
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beat is ehh.. I dont like it

Quality - was bad
Voice - Really cant judge cause how it sounded
Lyrics - were cool
Punches were eh....
Flow was ok but bland like you were reading it off paper

Decent track not mixtape type tho
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Old 02-18-05, 08:22 PM   #6
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Old 02-18-05, 08:35 PM   #7
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Bad quality homie, you need to get a better mic cause we have no way to tell if you got any skills withn tha voice... flow wasn't really that good homie, you need to work on this ... try memorising the lyrics you are gonna be spitting and concentrate on the performance instead of reading it and getting it down...I went thrue the same dawg... it will come along

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Old 02-18-05, 08:40 PM   #8
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Bad quality homie, you need to get a better mic cause we have no way to tell if you got any skills withn tha voice... flow wasn't really that good homie, you need to work on this ... try memorising the lyrics you are gonna be spitting and concentrate on the performance instead of reading it and getting it down...I went thrue the same dawg... it will come along

just my 2 cents aight


return tha crits plz:
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yeah i'll check that out. and i dunno wut u talkin bout, of all my rap i got this memorized tha best. lol, i aint c nuthin wrong wif tha flow or quality, lol, thanx fo tha feedback anyway, werd
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Old 02-18-05, 10:09 PM   #9
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You know this song right her.e.


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lmfao at this track.....this shit was accually good for ur first audio...on some old skool shit...ud be hot on an old skool beat...ur quality aint that bad either...u shuld start doin audio
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Old 02-18-05, 10:20 PM   #10
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THATS GANGSTA


lmfao at this track.....this shit was accually good for ur first audio...on some old skool shit...ud be hot on an old skool beat...ur quality aint that bad either...u shuld start doin audio


yo mayn, i appreciate tha feed. werd 2 old skool, ima old skool kinda mafucka, u no. and yeah, ima start doin alot of audio now, wen i git a chance. werd homey
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Old 02-18-05, 11:32 PM   #11
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dope shit, homie, especially fo ur first audio, make more shit

i thought his flow was tight....also, i thought the quality was fuckin dope for a ps2 headset
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Old 02-19-05, 10:32 AM   #12
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dude, for yo first audio this is very nice. Lol did yo mom yell at all that killing shit? lol tight shit. drop more yo pc
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Old 02-19-05, 11:43 AM   #13
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dude, for yo first audio this is very nice. Lol did yo mom yell at all that killing shit? lol tight shit. drop more yo pc


LOL, naw , i wuz home alone fo awile, she dont even no i recorded shit, lol. thanx fo tha feed yall, werd
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Old 02-19-05, 11:50 AM   #14
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like everyone sed this was a dope audio for ur first one, but obviously u needa get more on a track next time...... but this was pretty dope, and nice quality for a headset or w/e... kepp this up
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Old 02-27-05, 07:32 PM   #15
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man that is about as phat as ma mamma, and I aint just sayin that..that bitch is like 500 pounds, good 4 ur first one, really good man
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