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07-24-02, 02:22 AM
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the bond that holds us together
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The love we have, together is something people envy.
The joy we share, something they might never have. I will love you as long as my heart will let me. And you hopefully will feel the same way. If another comes if your life that will steal your heart, I will not stand in the way. Because I know I want you to be happy, and my love would let me do that. I cannot explain the feelings I have, because I have not had them before. All I know is that you are the one for me right now, this is all I know And hopefully you have these feelings to, that’s all I can wish. The love we have together is something people envy. The joy we share something they might never have I will love you as long as my heart will let me And you hopefully will feel the same way. There will be others, jealous of what we have, trying to bring us down, always. But with each other at each’s side, I know we can make, its what we have. We have joy, never ending, fights filled with pain, but were still here. They might pull us down, but we can only go up higher from there. And hopefully you’ll be there to, because that’s all I know. The love we have together is something people envy. The joy we share something they might never have. I will love you as long as my heart will let me. And you hopefully will feel the same way. |
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07-24-02, 06:31 AM
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i changed my title !!
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strong emotion in this piece a good flow and solid use of volcab this is a nice peice
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07-24-02, 09:46 AM
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IP:
deep showin of emotion! im really feelling this!!! keep dropping supa hotts.
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07-24-02, 12:04 PM
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<<<~*~$MaYheM$~*~>>>
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i missed ure deep iish girl!!!
got so much meanin in em, in nearly all tha pieces ive read of urs i can alwayz see wah ya sayin, keep spittin girl! nuff luv!! $pEaCe$ |
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07-24-02, 01:11 PM
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IP:
YEA BABY GIRL SHYT WAS EMOTIONAL. KEEP IT REAL. IT WAS HOTT KEEP POSTIN AND HIT ME UP TOO. I GOT U LUVLY. 1LUV
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07-25-02, 01:20 PM
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IP:
haha....i've missed this site..ya'll always respect me...much luv..God bless..1..
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07-25-02, 01:24 PM
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IP:
well...had some strong emotions...pure in a way....went in a bit of a cycle at times....but came good in the end...feel the topic (no matter how cliche it maybe) always...so its all good...respect....
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07-26-02, 02:24 AM
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IP:
haha i know its cliche....but oh well..b/c i rarely write pieces like this...its the first time i've been happy
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07-26-02, 08:34 AM
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IP:
eYo BabyGurl ...
Dope ish ... Diggin da hook ... Head up!! HOLLLLLAAAA!!! ~1~ |
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