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Old 02-19-05, 11:23 PM   #1
supamann
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Soljaz Mind-RATE PLEASE

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I rated The Tongue Rapist-Freeeeeeee Verse

Intro: I'm a Solja, a Solja, a Solja, what goes through my mind, all the time, I'M A SOLJA

You want to know what goes through the mind of a Solja
It is how, I, Supamann can make my lyrics much colda (colder)
Yo mayn it is also everything I hear and everything I see
We become Soljaz by everything that happens to you and me
Yo the rule with me is when one of ya homies die
Never show your passion, never show your feelings, and don't cry
And, man if I feel like it, I say what is on this Soljaz mind
I'm a diamond in the dirt, waiting for someone to come find
God, I ask you please forgive me, because my mind is sadistic
When I die will I go straight to hell, or will I be lifted
Mann my mind is complicated and very, very complex
Dogg there is way too much on my mind, too much stress
I have so many sin God, you already know, no need to confess
I pray everyday, and I hope I stay blessed, police arrest
On my block, hatas can’t stand it, my words are hot
I am only fourteen, and I have seen many men die and get shot
You know me, I spit that hard shit that all of you can feel
I am one of the best, and the reason for that is because I stay real
I was born in 1990, Mohammed, mayn, and I'm only 14
And I probably have done more than most have ever seen
I pray to God, half these things that happen to me are only a dream
And that it is not real, but hey man, real is how it seems
I don't have many friends, just a lot of foes and enemies
So many hatas out there, trying ta take me out and get me
I stay alone usually, all day, and I am usually paranoid
So much people everyday that I am trying to avoid
I see cuz killing bloods, and I see bloods killing cuz
And I see these fagot haters out of here showing me no love
I see a G splitting another gangsta like Moses split the Red Sea
But if any Krabs come near me, then I'm getting deadly
Expect me to rise in the game, like you feel the coming of Jesus
It is the Dynasty Soljaz, you know you got to feel us

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Every day thoughts of what goes through my mind
I find some good tuff, and I got to keep what I find
I always got to keep a vest and a loaded nine


Yo mayn, death is coming real soon, because I can feel it
I am hear and now, and I am one of the muthafuckin realist
I hit my enemies with bats, something like Babe Ruth
When I spit, no opinions all facts, you know I spit the truth
I got to kill all these hating bitches that’s acting jealous
I am gonna take the world, no it isn’t because I'm selfish
But because it is me against the world, and I initiated
Look at the aftermath after the police leave my block raided
Half of the people are gone, the neighbors were drug dealers
After ya seen ya boyz die, there is no physical or mental healers
Mann at night multiple rounds are fired multiple times
You got to realize there are multiple crimes, by multiple nines
Lots of people around call me the second Mike Tyson
By the way I be fighting, in physically and in writing
Dogg you can call me Mohammed because I fight like Ali
Also because all of my enemies and foes want to box me
Rapping man, I don't do this shit gently, don't offend me
I see a hit, and people say it aint personal some one sent me
Ta use tha semi, you know my lines are real edgy
But I speak the truth, so only listen if yall are ready
I got something to say and here it is, God bless the dead
I might be one of them soon, because haters put hits on my head
But they don't know that I am fuckin real hard to kill
Shoot me I will live still, it’s because of my vest and my will
Like Nas I'm ill, fuck the bitches and fame, I'm about bills
Ya haters and weaklings need ta get on my level like Trilleville
All I see in this life is destruction, and the youth’s corruption
People think if they have possessions, they could win
I don't like to beef, and I don't like to fight, but I have to
I know my lyrics are hot, because my lyrics grab you
Now I have to express what everyday I have to go through
So homie listen closely, and listen up, here ya go listen to

ChorusX2:
Every day thoughts of what goes through my mind
I find some good tuff, and I got to keep what I find
I always got to keep a vest and a loaded nine


I can’t trust many so I stay alone, I have to stay in solitude
I see bullets eating all people, kids, bitches and dudes
No if I haven’t told you yet, I don’t have many friends
Just foes and enemies, dogg I got them by the tens
Mostly just some fagots that fuck around and pretend
I put holes in them, that no therapy or surgery can mend
We got to change the way we live, that’s the solution
We still got to live to the fullest before the day Jesus come
But the homies I o have, every day I see them on the run
The ghetto life that we live isn’t great, it isn’t really fun
You may not want to believe it, but this is some true shit
Seen some people get beatings, taking punches and kicks
I see girls that are only 12 years old turning in to tricks
I see babies are dieing, and there mommas throwing fits
Just recently I was robbed in my own damned home
So I am gonna catch him with his buddies, or get him alone
This is California, dogg, this is where I fucking rome
I am one of the best in this game, and it is surely shown
Every day I ask God to forgive me for whenever I sin
Somebody mess with me, it’s either, he losses or I win
In this game, I am sure you can tell, I'm one of the truest
Tupac Shakur and Nasir Jones leaves me influenced
Because I am looking for Better Days like I was 2pac
And like Nas, I'm Illmatic, and I got people on my cock
I got to try to break free of this gang banging lifestyle
My rhymes flow oh so smoothly like I was the Nile
I am trying to climb, and I am trying to get my glory
I wanna know if you’re fake, or if you would kill for me
I'm a gangsta, I'm blooding, I'm no actor, and I’m a poet
I thought yall should know that, so now yall know it
Supamann spits that crazy talk, and walks that crazy walk
I had ta let everything off my mind that I see on this block

ChorusX2:
Every day thoughts of what goes through my mind
I find some good tuff, and I got to keep what I find
I always got to keep a vest and a loaded nine


A Soljaz Mind!
A Soljaz Mind!
A SOLJAZ MIND!!!



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Old 02-20-05, 11:20 AM   #2
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ummm dude...nobody's reading cuz you posted an entire damn song up B...record this and then I'll check it...nobody's gonna read your novel =/
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Old 02-20-05, 01:33 PM   #3
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um im an idiot for reading this ... it was long as fuck n borings n verrry simplistic....
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Old 02-20-05, 03:57 PM   #4
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well if u read it then fuckin rate it ya sshole
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Old 02-20-05, 04:03 PM   #5
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boring wasnt enough for u?... i was tryin to be nice ...

first off u started bout 32 lines with I .. which made reading ur shit very irritating u rambled on n on thru 3 stretched verses ... ur shit was way to wordy .. an wasnt even filled with discriptive imagery .. reading this was very borings .. this would be one of those 5 minute tracks prolly with boring lyrics .. learn to write to attract not to scare off readers ... asshole... now return the favor since i kno u saw my joint there an jus decided to up this boring shit
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