yo simple verse done quick

Here's a simple little verse for you kids to get hurt with
Not with a belt but a bat without a helmet
Smashin all you lames like a game that i played
So you know i'll rip bitches like a pro in his day
Punchlines so fine like the letters in this ryhme
Lasting through the fuckin times wishin yours were like mines
But its not and you cant so don't even try that
Being hopeful is hopeless your thoughts exact
But i'll step back let you try at this fuckin game
Watch you fuckin crash burn like a world trade plane
Till you fuckin go insane with people callin you lame
Till you fuckin die suicide, gun shot with cut viens
I'm so crazed i'm so good
Mix it up what you get? you get a flow insanely good
You get a fuckin shot to the brain now i'm fuckin done
Brain dead men need to stop 'fore they get one in their lungs

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i didnt like it no good vocab horrible flow and ure punches aint good 2/10
no hate though

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

well um.................its better than your last drop...it had structure....it had.........structure........work on everything else you didnt see in this post....2/10

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