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Pandemonium Parody (ILL SHIT NO DOUBT)
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Pandemonium Parody
(“Radio static”) “Please Stand By We Are Experiencing Technical Difficulties”. . . Scene One . . . (Start Beat) When the veils lifted, the show commences with the Mic protagonist resemblin…/ The antagonistic means of missile ballistics that hits knot heads leavin em twisted…/ In my distorted linguistics & in a matter of minutes I split intellects wit the quickness like African dicks in Japanese clitoris’s…/ Flippin foreplay practices to oral tactics like porn actress-is spewin wordplay habits as subliminal antics…/ That inflicts similar to lush-lips around penis tips…/ Still I catch fingertips like Chinese finger-grips when skimming my scripts…/ Rip ya at the hips cripple ya flow stiff like drips from hypothermic needle-tips…/ Slice the feeble wrists and stick sulfuric-acids in the band-age strips. . ./ In specifics these minimal clips from pitiful cliques means maximal spits…/ From Taurus’s who bullshit more than congested pipes in Toilets’s// Synopsist becomin lunatic on manuscripts I strike panic in critics Like if Britney spears got sick from dick wit DJ Quik sayin “Put It On Me” quick like Jenna Jamie-son in porno flicks grew hair on her tits wit Chris Kirkpatrick her tits. . ./ And I exposed it as part of my promotional gimmicks// Comin raw! makin niggaz piss so many gobs of blood-clots… in the draws they castrate they own balls I infiltrate “synagogues“ condemn the “gods” and ridicule religi-ons hot like chop-shops…/ Gettin more head in the confessional box’s than barber shops bustin my cock like Israeli glocks…/ I withdraw physics and re-state laws In mid-air decapitate ya head raw then mutilate ya vertebrae into shish-kabob// Scene Two When it comes to primal rage the feelin is mutual…/ I hold the manual Ya Couldn’t see me if ya had bifocals for pupils…/ Learn! You can’t spit hot shit if ya were hurlin boiling turds/ If ya Drank “kerosene” first ya vocals couldn’t “burn” verbals in a verse/ The purposes of murder-ers is like fine signatures from Thomas Hearns/ Rubbin it in like Lubriderm for dick-heads standin firm/ Massaging ya nerves like Pee Wee Herm spraying sperm gettin no pussy if ya splurged wit Howard stern // My Bad-Habits fill brains wit thoughts of Malice. . ./ Serrain-wrappin rapid These Candy-Wrappers tactics. . ./ Makin heads nod attractive in plastics aiding thoughts of static. . ./ Like I’m rappin Packaged Medicine-Tablets that’ll Hit ya like stray-dogs in Massive-Traffic. . ./ Tragic when ratings nc17 explicit is systematic to children through manic cinematics or pornographics. . . / Now the Kids are Melodramatic wit Drastic Semiautomatics that's Attackin establishments like Graphic-Stabbin// “Audience applause!!!” (Thank Y’all Thank Y’all) When the number three count falls// (Knock-Out!) Ya finished after I deliver clairvoyant Jabs and Punches . . ./ You Couldn’t “Bag” Battles, If they were “Sack-Lunches”// (Mommy!) Firmly “Liftin” my intellect in lessons . . . “Reppin” the energetic “Bars” in sessions . . . / Droppin the “Heaviest” impressions. . .that'll bruise ya Mid-Section// (Oohhh! Shit!!) So don’t underestimate, the lyricist who elaborates “Metaphysics” . . . / And possess minds of Mic “Physicists” like Holy-Spirits . . ./ (Uh!…Who Dere) Burnin ya “Optics,” strip ya “Vision”…Spittin 10 barz Earsplittin wit Catch-22 diction’s that’s 32 incisions/ We “Collide” proficient like “Kamikaze” missions . . . Heads vibin “Radiant” like “Nuclear-Fission” . . ./ HiP-HoP musicians is the sufficient Nutrition…“Slangin” the “Narcotic” of truth wit no “Prohibition . . ./ Where’s the intermission [B] |
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What’s tha deal y’all, hey yo as always I’m lookin for constructive criticism. . .so if you feelin tell me what you were feelin if not let it be know aiight. . .so reply whether positive and/or negative. . .thanks y’all aiight, One Love . . .Peace
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it was a pretty hott ass flow (especially towards the end) but there were certain parts in your flow when i got lost in your vocab........having a thick vocab is good, but there is a way to over-do it.........over all it was pretty nice.........you constantly elevatin and id like too see the shit that you gonna be spittin in like 6 months.........try too peep some of mah shit........
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Yo...Your thread was tite...The end was HElla Tite
(If ya Drank “kerosene” first ya vocals couldn’t “burn” verbals in a verse/) That was pretty tite...Much Props Bounce StillinStylez |
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KEEP IT UP YA'LL
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