What Im Feelin
im feelin hurt, unloved, lost and afraid,
feeling torn destroyed threads worn and frayed...
two many tears are runnin down my face......
While everyone sits n stares at my anguish in my work place
feelin betrayed led on and played a fool
led on and used as a game with your mind as the master tool
played love in this net fame ...heartbreakers earning all the game
feelin scared and hated ...left n undated.....
pressure of tears as my freind aim me sayin what up and lol
but all that im sein is my image in teh puddle in which these tears fell
FEELIN desserted and pained.....sould crushed and left stained
feelin used ...and sad.....far from the ppl tellin me if they happy or sad

feelin stolen and captured......but nothing has been taken
to make the wrong choice i must have been mistaken

feelin what i kno is tru that ive been completly denouced by blue
waht im feeling im sure is not being felt... by you
some bad shit happened to me today

tight piece.

Now you know im playin!!

Hazy baby..This piece was raw in more ways than one..Just lettin shit off ya chest makes the realest, most sentimental pieces..and this is exactly what that was..All that shit ya goin thru right now just laid out in this thread and put to a rhyme..Someone whos all hyped up and happy could be sad and depressed by the time they get to the last bar..cuz the transfer of emotions was that good and we can all relate in our own ways if not the same way..Great piece here hazy..keep ya head up..shit will solve itself soon 'nuff..its all luv gyrl..
peace.

damn...well most definetly raw...little structure....but that isnt important too much in a 'venting' piece....using poetry/writing as a punchbag....

i feel parts of this kind of deep and hard in my own context...but i can see it is very much a personal like thing...

...well...i hope whatever it is that happened (not going to presume or nothing..even though...ach! - fuk it...no presumptions from me..- !!! -_......that you stay strong...and erm.....get past it...(!?!?!?)...

...respect....

PS

if it ever gets on top of ya or something...doors always open...darneck@hotmail.com (hope not souinding patronising)....(!!!).....

thank you very much darneck and dagrl .....muah luv you both ........and darneck no doubt il lbe hitin up ya e mail for sure......damn you guys da bestteseses

awww, Gurl ... Hope wha eva u goin through
gets better!!

I really enjoyed readin this even though it was
sad an uhh raw ... very raw ..
Keep spittin wats on ur mind,

Props
~1~

uppin - by the way, just sent ya an e-mail about a couple of hours ago, but me account is playing up. so not sure its gone through....

yo ma i got dem feelings too. i feel u on dis piece. much respect and luv. 1oo