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Old 02-23-05, 09:03 PM   #1
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see when i walk up in a club
im tha only MC not ta fuck it up.....i spit it...
one word at a time , to express whats on my mind its not a life i makeing up
you've never herd of me.. thats cuz im a new rapper emerging to be ....wit rhymes you'll never find in a dictonary....
we all say we grew up as a screw up , till one day thats it ya been through enought..... fuck it thats it it's over im tier'ed of liven my hearts growin colder i want it ta stop ....im a be tha last one to die young or watch myself get older.....rest in peace 2 PAC tha realest one to ever fit tha discription of a solider.
man..........fuck it you to can run in to a littl e luck
this rap music i love it enought enought
i pray every day to be with my daughter
but some one seem's to keep her away..from me wanttin to be a father
that i need to be i guess she'll grow up one day
ta realize daddy loves her more than i can ever say
i was there tha first time you opened your eye's an it, took my breath away

baby dont cry im always be there when you need me
daddy's a little crazy i know sometimes believe me
mabey if mommy an i didnt argue all tha time you could see me
one day will be together forever
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Old 02-24-05, 12:27 AM   #2
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It's A Lil Simplistic But You Got Potential.....elevate And Spit Some More...create A Structure To Your Flow And Maybe It'll Grow Nicely...keep At It Son....
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