been a minute but I'm still at it..

don't matter the arena, you can name the price
guaranteed to have yah brain on ice

what I spew is heavy
ya'll bite off me and consume the petty,
niggas know what I chew is deadly (uhh)
today is now,
the past is gone
you outcast's is outlandish
the weak don't outlast the strong (oh)
I split herbs and part the seasons
it's the,
#1 contender in the colliseums
rape mother nature and console the "sun"
left a bastid to father the game and mold the young
made lesser men outta veterans
for sayin I'm not better than (?)
until I contest and win
over the average bottom feaders (wait)
to son niggas,
I'll undue gods spawn and semen
my life is defined through lines
projected through cords and recievers
you adore the Madina,
I've grown lyrically
sewn up the game from things I was told
that were stitched in my soul eventually
it was said b4 that I flowed differently
ha,
it's been said that what man does not understand,
he'll throw to opidomy
I am back from the hardships thrown my way
the rest were left to fray, grow old and decay
Edgar AlPO to Jimmy Swagger
in the rap race my acts portrayed and the facts displayed
while I'm skipping past yah
(u fuccs)
the God raping the virgin Mary in the green pastures
the rest a ya'lls won't get the picture
until the scene after.........


yea, uhhh...........it's like!


I'm an artist at heart
but a gangster in the physical
I've been through the turmoil
yah pranks aint visual (uh)
wait, and yah threats are taken as minimal
a kid behind a screen tryna demise me
is labled as miserable
fully developed as a man?
young scrap ask not!
get disregarded and unacknowledged like a muthafuckin spam block
battles, I've won em
damage, I've done it
I freestyled most of my shit
so that 2nd chanced yah manhood don't it?
ha, you can die
yes, ta day
no not yes-ta-day
my latest projections say
He'll inhale hale hell and blow yah flesh away
niggas
I aint departed from the booth
the apple doesn't fall far from the tree
I aint parted with my roots
so
let the celebration start
the self pitty you contain in yah heart
is at an end,
I've remained from the start
an OG they proclaimed me,
over net games and lame feats,
the best, aint no maybe's
deliver it raw like virgins with babies

Pretty dope, wordplay was nice in places, good vocab too, very creatoive at parts

Few questions tho
Do you have any battle links?
You said its been awhile, are you an alias?

holla back.........

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...56&page=2&pp=15

link to my replies

good lookin on the feedback as well

-gully

just joined yessaday, and I have been off line for a while, I was on Rapaddict, and Rapboard the majority of the time as Edgar AlPo

-gully

Get a battle open an holla at me, cause i am starting a crew, with Class.sic (dope as fuck) an Nostradamus (Illest emcee on rv) ....an we lookin for new talent, an you got talent, but i wanna see what ya battle verses are like, go post a callout in Bitch slapped my nigga...

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no doubt, that was the next thing I was gonna do