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Old 02-25-05, 02:47 PM   #1
king gremlin
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whats good, peeps.
just a short lil keystyle to give ya'll a sample of what im about.
havent done this in a while, so im a lil rusty. any sort of criticism is welcomed. in fact, i encourage it. it'll only make me work harder. thanx.


the shit's like pockets full of clips
i'm like george popadopolis, adopting little black kids, just in time for the apocalypse.
don't give a shit, bout rappers totin pistols.
any mc wanna act up, u know ill blow the whistle.
pop culture reference, a regular.
rappers half steppin with rhymes, dead competitors.
just a lil keystyle to get the mind flowin.
give me a few weeks, then i'll continue growin.
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Old 02-25-05, 04:32 PM   #2
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very good piece u did dat very basic vocab but in the next joint use more metaphors & a very multis 2 liven it up overall is 9.0/10
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