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we may still do a outro and intro to this but we'll wait and see now to see what people think anyways new track here called spark that clip feat senser hit the link below that says spark that clip


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OK... its playin...

Beat is alright. Not bad... But not excellent.

Cali: It sounds like your vocals are too loud, OR youre too close to the mic. Also you dont sound very confident on this one. Needs a bit more emotion. Dubs need to be better. Lyrics were on and off. Flow was pretty good.

Hook is cool.

Senser: Nice presence, nice flow. Nice production. Lyrics were pretty good.

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i thought my emotion was good dubz were purposly done that way for the echo but ok omb i respect ya opinon

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Word.... just feels like ive heard better from you

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ok

list'n

Cali-not feel'n it at all homie, sorry, no hate but da lyrics iz hot but ya delivery iz trash on here

Hook-hot

Senser-pretty good, feelin it mayn, real New York type of shit

Cali-5/10
Senser-7/10

Overral-6/10

jea i didnt like cali's delivery, lyrics were ight, still seems like sometimes u rhyme just to rhyme, emotion isnt as same as sener.
hook is ight
sener has betta quality
is this the same verse as u and DI's freestyle collab? lol

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da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Empire: Flow was weird as shit, didn't like it...sound like you be crying, lines was iight...the first verse, lyrically, was better than the second to me, but the second was better flowise..just lacking...

Senser: weird ass voice dog, some parts I couldn't decipher what you was saying. the echos was type gay. but I was feeling ya shit tho, came type hard, gangsta approach, gritty..feelin that...stayed on beat..coo...

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listening.....
beat is average..

CALI....voice sounds wierd.....style is different....a lil...sorry

senser.....senser is dope.....damn yo this shit is dope....perfect for the beat....i wanna here you spit about some hip hop shit tho...that woudl be dope..

senser owned this shit
chorus...is dope..

CALI...quality is wack....this was kinda sorry ive heard way better form you cali.....

good thing senser was on that chorus....

i know im just a newb but i listen to audio.thats why i came to this site for the audio...

ok listening to this......

Cali.....you need to work on rapping to the beat....you sound like you just rappin to get it over....u need to rap on beat......the beat needed to be louder.....i could barely hear it.......same with SenseR...........SenseR the hook......was iight i've heard better from you.......the ish was hot tho on ya verse....the flow was nice.....we need to get on a collab man.......word.......well man.......this was a overall ehh ok track......luckily SenseR was on it....or it woulda been ........ehh bad.....i mean......Cali you need to switch ur voice to this........and rap to the beat....dont just write......man...woh..this was som you just threw together.......

SenseR-On hook=7/10 on Verse=8.5/10
Cali=Verse 1=6/10 Verse 2=6.5/10

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beat is fuckin dope
nuff said lol,i aint really feelin the first verse,aint givin feed on the secvond cuz i dont have any time,imma do it later

well this isnt my style of song.. but i gotta admit the hook on this is DOPE.. CALI i dont wanna sound like a bandwagoner but im not feeling the delivery at all.. i know what u was trying to do..and i think it coulda worked.. maybe redo it.. ughh i dont know.. BUT SenseR's verse was pretty dope.. voice fit real well on that beat.. was feeling it tho.. not to bad not to bad.. stay up pz..

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Cali-u cant take any feedback can u

no, ur flow was not perfect

nobody on dis sites flow iz perfect

u gotta a net flow

nigga u think u really tight rite?

face facts and stop bein a lil bitch

probly gettin da red shit outta pussy rite now

damn I liked this beat.

wasn't really feelin' first cats verse. It was ok. quality was wack. delivery bad, lyrics were nice, but other than that.. eh...

hook dude, was dope.
same wit second verse, nothin' else to say.

Didn't like third verse. Quality was really bad. eh...

This track had great potential but the first guy kinda brought it down.

6/10 pc

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Nice beat, i like it...
CALI~you are too close to the mic, but you're delivery is good i think, just some mixing problems, but minor,good lyrics
HOOK~is dope...
SENSER~nice mic presence and flow, nice lyrics....
overall, you guys sounded good working together, good track, some dope lyrics in this track...whoa

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beat was ok

when i first heard the first guy I didn't like em,but then he picked it up and started ripping it. It was too gangster for real, but thats what sells. The hook was ok, you might want to change some wording, but other then that it was a good song. better then most the bs on here.

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